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I want to understand how she will modernize everything so quickly when she doesn't have the resources to do so, like MC needed her colonies and the plundering of the Catholic church to boost her kingdom, how will she do the same if Japan is isolated?
You are an idiot? Unless there is a tracking magic, your sister is ''officially missing'', even if the brother by some miracle finds the mc, it is impossible for him to know that he was the one who killed his sister, that is simply ridiculous
I thought it was obvious
And only, after he created the titans (something he already did) he loses his relevance, he is a dead character who has already done everything the myth said he would do, so from now on it's free play
I like Nuwa, or rather, I learned to like her, although shouldn't Fuxi be there too?
You know you're embarrassing yourself, right? Depending on the version, some are considered primordial, but the constant has always been, nix, erebus, gaia, tartarus, eros and a few more, uranus, although son of gaia, is also considered a primordial
Memories, he received all of Lucifer's memories, so currently he is not Lucifer, nor the playboy who died, he is between the two (although he is much more Lucifer than the playboy due to the overwhelming amount of memories and experiences that lucifer has more)
Sith being sith, they have a fetish for absolute power and being emperor is a very clear representation of this type of power, although there are sith who don't exactly want imperial power and go for a more personal side (like nihilus)
I loved this map in battlefront 2, the end point was just insane to play
Not to mention its own size, in this period of the galaxy, it was not common to see such gigantic ships, in fact there was scrutiny for such large ships, which is why the ship project that you are using as a personal ship did not go ahead, it was precisely that , besides man, the people of the galaxy didn't see the need for something so big
I wanted the author to be aware of the scale of things, a ship the size of Mc's personal ship, is a subject that cannot go unnoticed, seriously, these things are projects that preceded the super star destroyer, this is the only ship that alone has the firepower to Clear literally everything in your path and dominate an entire system alone with just your resources
I confess that it is extremely strange that Satine blushes and bursts into laughter, considering that she and Obi-wan are similar in age, she should be around 26/27 years old and from what we saw in the series, she is an extremely serious woman, even let it be 10 years in the future, at the time we are in, she has been in government long enough to not have this laughing fit, idk, maybe she really laughs because of how ridiculous the situation is
It's a city, it's kind of absurd for a unit to take down a planet
What an adventure... Honestly, I have a bittersweet feeling, many things are great in this soap opera and I had a lot of fun because the MC was so random and spontaneous that it entertained you, it had a unique charm, it was good. But it has to be said that around chapter 90 things got terribly confusing, there was a distinct lack of detail and jumps that even when you went back to read it again you didn't understand 100% of what was going on and that was frustrating and disheartening. Of course, it got better later, but it was still strange, there were details missing, which made it appear that they were events that were on screen, like the MC's powers that he gained, entire sections of important fights, all off-screen. To be honest, what bothered me the most and although this is not exactly a criticism as it is the author's style, was the lack of focus on PoVs, I felt that we needed more PoVs, to understand what the characters feel, especially the League of Justice. , we barely had contact with him, the conversations were always very short or Ian didn't say anything, this PoV was also important for us to know exactly which DC arc we were in, a lot of things happened and the characters changed and you didn't understand, they said just 1 sentence of explanation. For example, Batgirl: We met Batgirl briefly at the beginning of the work and never had contact with her again, dozens, almost 100 chapters or more passed, and she came back completely different, adapting to Mc's group and supporting his cause, even as she used to do. she was against it. Why didn't we see this? A Batman PoV showing the Batfamily's perception of Gotham's changes and their opinions about it would be a much better alternative than Batgirl appearing out of nowhere and saying ''I'm on your team'' which is strange, even though she has lost her legs, it was said that MC donated 100 Cure vials, she doesn't need to enter the Roses. Lastly, the romance, I like the initial romance, with selina, ivy and harley, they were very well developed so you like her, revan I never felt chemistry, it seemed more like siblings, or a father figure for a girl, but a boyfriend ? No, so much so that they never kissed but she is always included as a ''lover'' which honestly doesn't make sense and Zatanna who, despite kissing Ian and supposedly having had sex, bothers me a lot because it is VERY implied, Ian always appears in intimate moments with the first 3, but supposedly Zatanna is also part of the harem, but the author never showed these intimate moments? Why? If she was just for the sake of it, then xanadu should be too, but she's not because she's not part of the harem, the same applies to Athena, she's just a friend. Diana is the last member added to the harem, honestly it was strange, I could read everything at once, so I remember small details more clearly, and frankly I didn't understand Diana's emerging feeling, it was very strange because although Ian saved her home, they were still in a bit of a feud due to conflicting ideas, so you could say that after she thanked her, they were on neutral-good terms, after the flashpoint all they did was fight and Ian asked her out who even rejected and asked for distance to preserve her sanity, she seems much more receptive when she remembers these memories, as if they had created a bond, which when I was reading, I was???? Diana is a strong woman, difficult to enter into your heart, she needs very dedicated care that the end of the work did not dedicate to giving her, so at the end of the work with her dying in love with Ian, totally confused, it is frankly, confusing for you, reader too, it's too intense for little interaction, especially the ending, I didn't understand why she kissed him, I felt like there was a huge chunk of development missing or it happened off-screen and we didn't see it
hmm? Please author, don't start raving too soon with these absurd comparisons, HP magic is extremely weak compared to DxD, the idea of Vold being as strong as a veteran war angel is frankly... I hope it was just a FMC's insane lapse
I think there will be a lot more inconsistencies in the future, I recommend that you don't think too much and go with the flow, it's a relatively pleasant read and a good way to pass the time
I think this work is good, but it lacks a lot of detail, a lot of things in the author's mind, he is slightly overlooking it and forgetting to transcribe it into the book, so for him, it always had a tail, but us? The most we know about her is the color of her hair and eyes and when she uses mana, the image of a dragon appears.