1. The MC has no real motivation 2. I hope you understand the scale of power that exists among sprinters The fastest flash in the entire multiverse can degrade everyone in a city in 0.00001 seconds 3. That you explore the DC muntiverse now that all speeds can age between different realities 4.you have to give him more abilities that relate to each other 5.power scale the mc currently couldn't take on flash or most justice league minus superman
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LIKEAntiNoob:True. But this is years before the justice league is formed. So he has time to improve. Also, this is a very between the arrowverse and the main DC Comics so flash won't immediately be going as fast as light.
ReaderLove:So is this novel like a au of MCU or DCU or both? Your novel description is confusing mate.