Reviews of Otherworldly

Written very nice, especially the part with the 'Forgotten Ones' and the memoir. I hope you won't leave the main character as a support type, I suggest a little kickass and expect your character development in the next chapters. 😉

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Loved this story, very well written. Character & plot development is good as well as the flow of story. If anyone's looking for anything fresh and interesting, then this is your cup of tea. Highly recommend it to the readers. ** you have got another reader, that's me. Although I do hope you change your book cover to an anime one, it's bound to attract more readers, but then again it's my own opinion. Keep up the good work 👌

(this review is based on ch. 15, but since that's all for now, i decided to share my thoughts about the world, the characters and the writing style in general.) While the premise and even the world itself so far are pretty generic, with the only exception being the MC's occupation as a nurse / field medic type of thing, it is implemented beautifully through superb writing and very human character designs. Or worded differently : it manages to avoid nearly all the pitfalls most novels of this genre are usually falling into. The main character isn't a horny teenager that somehow manages to get really strong right from the get go, he's not dark and brooding, not looking for revenge. Neither he nor the people around him are one-dimensional, everyone has different sides to them, and most importantly, everyone tries to understand each other in a very relatable, and very realistic kind of way. Therefore i am really looking forward to more chapters, hoping to have found a nice, human and relatable story set in another world, instead of the usual clichés everyone in this genre has come to expect.

The practically professional writing quality transports you into the author's world vividly. The characters are well though and deep. I enjoyed the plot for it was well explained. :3 Keep up the good work!

Wow what can I say? I was hooked right at the beginning. The story is so good. I understand that the author is only doing this part time but I see alot of otential if he decides to do this permanently. Can't wait for what happens next!

The writing quality is good. The journey with Sebastian let’s you feel and see everything he does which was great! The only things as a fellow reader I️ can say is, I️ thought the story’s development was slow. Like one reader mentioned; I thought there was a lot of info and was getting lost in reading. However it all tied together because I kept reading since I wanted to know what was going to happen next. Good writing author!

The story is really good and so is your writing style. I am liking the way the author is taking time to develop it. The chapters are long and you need to read them carefully. Keep up the good work.

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Though it's a bit slow-paced for others, I like how detailed the author can be at times. It really shows the time and attention spent while writing. Good concept and an extremely well written novel.

Characters- The characters are not 2D, not just arrogant, bad, good, happy. They seem that they have emotions and are very real. World- World even before transmigration was wonderful and after the transmigration it is good but as it only has been starting we still have to wait for it. Writing quality- The writing quality is very high with almost no grammatical error. Error rate is like 1 mistake per 4 chapter. Story development- The story development is a little slow, but it really let's you savor the feeling of story.

Authors grammar and writing style is pretty good. My only suggestion would be to wait until there's around 30 chapters cause the story is really slow paced. First 5 chapters were completely just information chapters. MC doesn't talk, others just explain the world to the readers. The next couple of chapters afterward is a slow introduction to the laws and culture. I'm assuming will be like this for the first 20 chapters.

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