Review Detail of Shinkyo1 in Otherworldly

Anticlimatic. The novel is very well written but that's it. The pace is so so slow but ... then the author makes great jumps in time without reason or explation. In a moment the mc is starting training the next has abilities and he combats. You don't know how he learn them, the process or anything. In the 14 first chapters there is not explanation of skill system. The mc is not coherent and the reactions are not realistic. He is a nurse in Africa and has stupid reactions every time he sees a dead body. He should be beyond violence, dead and ... everything. The story development doesn't have any appealing and is anticlimactic. Well, I don't want to be more critic. Maybe what surprised me more was that all where excellent reviews... The story has potencial but must be rewritten.