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Characters- The characters are not 2D, not just arrogant, bad, good, happy. They seem that they have emotions and are very real. World- World even before transmigration was wonderful and after the transmigration it is good but as it only has been starting we still have to wait for it. Writing quality- The writing quality is very high with almost no grammatical error. Error rate is like 1 mistake per 4 chapter. Story development- The story development is a little slow, but it really let's you savor the feeling of story.

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Thank you for the feedback! My editing time and character creation time is definitely longer than my writing time. I wanted to describe things in detail to avoid feeling rushed but I think it's a bit slower now. I'll pick up the pace in the next few chapters.