Review Detail of DarkImmortal_Intel in Otherworldly

Authors grammar and writing style is pretty good. My only suggestion would be to wait until there's around 30 chapters cause the story is really slow paced. First 5 chapters were completely just information chapters. MC doesn't talk, others just explain the world to the readers. The next couple of chapters afterward is a slow introduction to the laws and culture. I'm assuming will be like this for the first 20 chapters.