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Apophis9
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Written very nice, especially the part with the 'Forgotten Ones' and the memoir. I hope you won't leave the main character as a support type, I suggest a little kickass and expect your character development in the next chapters. 😉

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Thanks! I actually did set him up to have a different role later. I want him to grow and discover himself as the story progresses.