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One Piece : Raijin
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One Piece : Raijin

loner113

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In his past life, he is an otaku , a rare one too . He is also a national champion in martial arts. But he got bored because he can get everything. Until he got his soul transferred into his favourite anime . Now he wants to become strong , reach top of the pyramid of strong . But he likes to be carefree too . So read how he becomes strong with a carefree life.

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GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6GGMissFortune

MC wastes his time in a kitchen making money he doesn't need.... backstory makes his granddad seem like a retarded fk who caused the deaths of many people... turns out Mc is a retarded fk just like his granddad even tho he got reincarnated with cheats

CanibauZ
CanibauZLv5CanibauZ

Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing Very confusing

CZ2128_Delta
CZ2128_DeltaLv6CZ2128_Delta

the hell is this?! read up to chapter 12 to see if there will be improvements in the grammar but it just keeps getting worst!! the hell is this?! read up to chapter 12 to see if there will be improvements in the grammar but it just keeps getting worst!! the hell is this?! read up to chapter 12 to see if there will be improvements in the grammar but it just keeps getting worst!!

The_Airojab
The_AirojabLv5The_Airojab

Got no clue what i read here, too jumbled up for me to read more. _------------------------------------------------------------------------_

Eslyna
EslynaLv4Eslyna

Didn't like it ____________-_-_-__-&-&-&-&-&-&--7&^^^-6*6&8&7///*&7\)+4_*)*&*^7>>>>7/7&7&7&/&/77/-8^6>^^&&&8&&=&/8&&&878-9&9&&&**___^^^5,&#^@"&8&8&@&&#&@886888887-466667

Dreamer_Mage
Dreamer_MageLv3Dreamer_Mage

THE FUCK IS THIS SHIT!!!! I just read it to 8 chapter and i'm already sick of it. Bad grammar, confusing names, confusing plot. Overall this is very bad, sorry if you feel bad about it. IMPROVE YOUR GRAMMAR FOR GOD'S SAKE

StressedByHW
StressedByHWLv4StressedByHW

Story was pretty good until mc’s girlfriend was introduced to the story, it’s like the mc became the side character and Rita, his girlfriend became the new main character, from what I just said you can decide to read it or not

AndiAng
AndiAngLv5AndiAng

i had read some chapter regarding this fanfic the author is good at writing out his imagination there is some mistake here and there like trying to make it funny but fail etc. for background story the author does not research enough background story of the fanfic you are writing

Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv5Passerby_Venne

The concept is interesting. Jack dies and is reborn in the body of enel 17 years before he's defeated by luffy. Furthermore, Enels backstory is quite mysterious and unknown in the canon, which makes Enel the perfect mc as the author can create his own backstory and develo his fanfiction world. However the grammatical errors are making it hard to read and be immersed in the story. You barely understand what's happening and can barely differentiate between characters. And there's often sudden changes is the story which is not explained. For example, in chapter five author just writes "Enels name is going to be Jack from now on" and from there on everyone he knew beforehand suddenly calls him Jack which really takes from the experience of reading the story. As I said before, the story is interesting and it is worth a try as you might get more out of this novel than me. Do mind that I'm only on chapter five as I write this comment, so the author might get much better as the chapters go. If I continue to read and find the novel to become better I'll give it a new rating and review. :)

Mambabueee
MambabueeeLv1Mambabueee

at the beginning your grammar is really bad. and the MC has 3 or 4 names in the first chapters. and after this Rita comes everything is absolutly confusing and without any sense

Master_0ogway
Master_0ogwayLv4Master_0ogway

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Rukimedsu
RukimedsuLv4Rukimedsu

Muy bueno()()()()()()()()))()()()()(()()()()()()()))))()()()()()()()()()))()()()()()()())()()()()()()()()()()()()))()))()()¡)()()()()()()()()()()¡)()()()()()()()()))()()()()()

TurtleManiacc
TurtleManiaccLv4TurtleManiacc

donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !donmt drop it !

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Medalha
MedalhaLv7Medalha

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EijiSeishuu
EijiSeishuuLv4EijiSeishuu

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