Review Detail of Passerby_Venne in One Piece : Raijin

The concept is interesting. Jack dies and is reborn in the body of enel 17 years before he's defeated by luffy. Furthermore, Enels backstory is quite mysterious and unknown in the canon, which makes Enel the perfect mc as the author can create his own backstory and develo his fanfiction world. However the grammatical errors are making it hard to read and be immersed in the story. You barely understand what's happening and can barely differentiate between characters. And there's often sudden changes is the story which is not explained. For example, in chapter five author just writes "Enels name is going to be Jack from now on" and from there on everyone he knew beforehand suddenly calls him Jack which really takes from the experience of reading the story. As I said before, the story is interesting and it is worth a try as you might get more out of this novel than me. Do mind that I'm only on chapter five as I write this comment, so the author might get much better as the chapters go. If I continue to read and find the novel to become better I'll give it a new rating and review. :)