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on the first day after being expelled from the national football team,

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it's a Chinese novel So i Will do Best and if anything wrong plz tell me Chen Yufeng time-traveled into the body of a young player from the youth training of Stuttgart U17. However, due to the intervention of a related party at the beginning, he was expelled from the national team by the head coach of the National Football Team U17! Frustrated, Chen Yufeng chose to permanently retire from the national team and stay away from this smoky environment! The most powerful football system is activated, and the starting reward is a long-range shot that must be entered into the card. A long-range shot must be scored within ten minutes of playing! Since then, an alternative has emerged in football

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SLIKOH
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We need more football webnovel with system or not We need more football webnovel We need more football webnovel We need more football webnovel We need more football webnovel

UnRandom_69
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It's better to rewrite the whole story if it's Chinese, than to just translate it. I don't have a real problem with grammar or spelling, it's just Meh.

edgy
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average at best!! it's better if u re write instead of translating

Sneja241
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I like football fanfic and this is one the best. More chapters author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Udbdidz8sndhe8e9eijezbd9z9zndipdbd9dvd99zvs6dufvr9f8nsoztskeudoeo fod djfjfbfjfkfkfoeorje99ebrbros9dbrififk

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