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The story had everything to have a good ending, maybe not an epic ending, but one that I would remember with pleasure, and with a pleasant feeling, the ending of this story is anticlimactic, bland, so miserable that I barely remembered that I had read the ending a few moments ago... Having one part of your story anticlimactic can add some depth to it... But not in this story, and not in this ending. By this I don't mean the fight part, it's literally something that was cooking a few chapters ago, but... What made this story good was its development, not its fights, we didn't see how the romance developed, the full perspective of all the characters, it never delved into anything... It was just a waste of time.
Sasuke probably has too much money, Sasuke probably has too much money, taking the money from the Uchihas was not a priority, most likely they would have taken all the Ninja knowledge within the clan, As powerful jutsu, let's take Sasuke as an example, he didn't know too many Jutsus at the beginning, after years of training after the massacre, so having some knowledge about Hiruzen, it's unlikely that he took his money... Maybe they took all the lands of the Uchihas, that is more valuable than the money itself for its potential development. (I'm just trying to justify where Sasuke got money to pay Senshi.)
Well, then it's better than most S-rank heroes? I mean regarding his stats, for example his speed compared to Flashie Flash's (I don't remember what his name was)
Uzumaki Naruto... No one really gives it any real importance, anyone who wasn't a mid-ranking shinobi, and lived long enough, would remember the Uzumaki clan, as few remember the Senju, and if there were no tsunado they would be extinct. In the manga you can notice that few know real information about their world, for example Sasuke didn't even know who Kakashi was, despite being Jonin from Elite or something similar, or his father...
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The only notable problem with this fanfic is that it takes too long to upload a chapter, but... That's not a bad thing, even though they're short chapters, they're decent, as well as comforting.
Context? Lore?