Nightingale367
I AM HERE AGAIN because this author is also a friend of mine so I came to show support. I can't believe they sneakily wrote almost 60 chapters and yet this story is so under the radar. HOW CAN NOBODY CHECK IT OUT?! The justice is absent so I shall be that voice that new readers need to hear. 1. Author makes a point of REGULAR UPDATES so you can relax, it will not leave you hanging parched in a desert of updates being just an illusion. 2. Author has a good grasp of the English language so your eyes will be blessed. 3. Unlike overrated popular novels of the same genre, I think someone who doesn't copy and paste similar plots and repeat them or thousands of chapters is worth giving a try. That said, if you're still not convinced then you shouldn't be here. Go read something else instead of scrolling through reviews.
While I’m not a fan of harem, I applaud the author for writing a plot with cultivation involved because cultivation to me is a complex subject, and I don’t really get to appreciate the work of authors who write with cultivation that well. But this was surprisingly lot better in explanation, and it was able to follow along the storyline without getting majorly confused ! xD All in all, to any readers considering if to read this, do read it before deciding to skip ! So keep up the good work author ! (๑>◡<๑)
It is well-written and has a great potential to be one of those popular cultivation theme novels out there. Considering that it has already a lot of chapters going, it's the best time to binge reading it. Yet, I think the flow of the story line is a bit confusing. There are some parts of the story that makes you think, where did it happen, and if you missed some part of the story. I’m halfway done reading and I can’t seem to put it down. Good job!
Although I'm not really a great fan of cultivation and system stories, I have read a few great ones. The "Nirvana Sect Master System" has potential to be one of them. However, I will give an honest review, and here it is: Points to consider: -Flow: The scenes could jump all over the place, so be careful of that. I didn't even realize the scene had gone from a flashback to present time until rereading it. -Grammar: The grammar is relatively better than most Webnovels, but I can't deny that it still has some issues here and there. -Characterization: I think this is the point which I have to emphasize on the most. What makes the character different than the other cultivation novel MCs? Frankly, I'm more interested in knowing his mother more than himself. Good points: -The novel has so many chapters, and as a fellow author, I applaud that! -It's generally clear to understand, and can be a great binge read for cultivation and system lovers alike! To conclude, it's a binge-worthy read, yet still suffers from grammatical errors and general clarity of narration. However, I do sense that it might get better as it goes on, so read on! I might consider continuing this as well. :D To the author, great job and keep up the good work!
There are many chapters to read. I'm quite surprise that this story isnt getting the attention that it deserves. The english and grammer is actually quite good compared to most of the translations. The MC Ace is actually a MC with his own personality and readers will surely empathy with him. I am hoping that it is harem though:)
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