Review Detail of Hua_Li_An in Nirvana sect master system

Although I'm not really a great fan of cultivation and system stories, I have read a few great ones. The "Nirvana Sect Master System" has potential to be one of them. However, I will give an honest review, and here it is: Points to consider: -Flow: The scenes could jump all over the place, so be careful of that. I didn't even realize the scene had gone from a flashback to present time until rereading it. -Grammar: The grammar is relatively better than most Webnovels, but I can't deny that it still has some issues here and there. -Characterization: I think this is the point which I have to emphasize on the most. What makes the character different than the other cultivation novel MCs? Frankly, I'm more interested in knowing his mother more than himself. Good points: -The novel has so many chapters, and as a fellow author, I applaud that! -It's generally clear to understand, and can be a great binge read for cultivation and system lovers alike! To conclude, it's a binge-worthy read, yet still suffers from grammatical errors and general clarity of narration. However, I do sense that it might get better as it goes on, so read on! I might consider continuing this as well. :D To the author, great job and keep up the good work!