Neo Soul King Yhwach

first time writing on webnovel so yes i'll give myself a 5 star review because yhwach said so and you know what happens to those that refuse his majesty

I generally don't post reviews but as the author wanted me to give feedback so here we go:Grammer: Writing wise so far I have not noticed any grammatical errors and author does highlight which character is speaking which is good.Chapter: chapters are long and that is what I appreciate, yes some chapters feel like they are going for too long with just talking but I enjoy them as I do not enjoy having short chapters and being left in suspense for weeks to months.Characters: as noted above, though there is some reduction in points in both story and character as there are some moments that feel like there is a redundancy or repitition in dialogue.Update stability: keep it in your library for a week and you will see how many times you will be pinged daily.world background: For the author's first book he is very good at developing the world and giving visual to the scenery.overall: It is an enjoyable piece of story just that you might feel like you are reasing shakespeare sometimes due to the way the dialogues are going but when it is fun to see the little twists and turns that befall TWD cast when bleach is introduced into the world.

this fanfic is so immersive I'm impressed with it this is worth you time I guarantee

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5 star for finally pointing out those cringe and repetitive multiversal harem with some sick and annoyingly forced relationship between many authors mc with some perfectly fine characters. like how they make their mc smile at a character's direction then they immediately thirst for him. like WUT?

You have reflected the character very well in this fanfic of Yhwach which makes you feel the most real I have ever read, thank you for your effort. It's the best fanfic I've read at telling the story through the pov of two or more people. [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend]

One of the very few fan fics here where effort can be felt when reading it. It starts out slow with the walking dead arc and but it is totally worth it once things start to scale up. The authors take on Yhwach and there own additions have been original and up to a quality that few other fan fics have been able to come close to. I have never been one to write a review as it was always a bit out of the way but this is the one which has broken that line of thought. I insist you at least try it.

Been waiting ages for a tale like this, and let me tell you, it’s worth every second! The story is like a rollercoaster that never lets up, and the characters? They’re as real as they come. Each chapter leaves me yearning for more, A must read for anyone who craves a story that digs deep. Five stars, no doubt. -William Afton

mega w author he makes sense and wrote all detalics, i love that fanfic, i love themes about bleach, im making a trash word for 140 words, cuz i cant post it while i have <140 words gl tho!

Writing’s very good, almost too good! 5 stars, great job! And I also think that the stability is very nice, as this man updates every 20 years! Only 20 years! 5 stars for that! But..the story development is lacking, where the emotion feels very forced and just way too weird, like how the characters don’t question how this random guy says he’s been given a second chance but not get crucified. 3 stars, do better. The character design, however, is very nice and accurate! 5 stars, continuing the streak! And the world background is also amazing. 5 stars! 4.6 overall.

one of my all time favorites, I truly love this fan-fic.

Will yhwach return to bleach? by the way good fanfic

over all very good ff. kind of fell near the end just because of zeagar but very good over all and a absolute banger of a ff

seriously author you can cook fr fr keep cooking author.

Great story only problem is how the characters talk, it feels like a Wattpad story which isn't bad but could be better. anyways great in every other aspect.

Hey bro what font did you use for your cover? It looks really good

thats gotta be the most convoluted synopsis ive ever read. what should have been a couple words stretched out painfully over a paragraph.....

reed up to chapter 76 and I gotta say the dxd arc really killed the story for me all the character development from the first 2 worlds go down the drain and like Yhwach got factory reset to himself during the beginning of the blood war arc only made it that far because i hoped he'd get back

This is not Yahweh, the character, strength, desire and goals are completely different. It’s as if a weak-willed person is walking around other worlds and doing nothing. Zegar is more interesting as a protagonist. (Google translator)