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I don't give review's often but this story is just too good to not give a review the story has potential and at least for now there is no cliche no forced romance and is a good lighthearted novel which is needed sometimes after reading cliches and AUTHOR please don't drop the novel it is one of the best novel I've read till now. **:Author Thank you for this wonderful story
Author Do you want to know why most fanfics are not succesful? Authors wasting time.Making 10 k polls instead of 1 chapter.Who the **** cares of status sheet,instead of those 10 status sheets nobody absolutely cares about,we want chapters.More chapters=more power stones.Stop caring what ppl think,i dont wanna make my own story ,i want to read yours.So please make chapters.
I have been reading this since it came out. I really liked it then I still like it now. I have read many Naruto fan fictions, but I can say that this is definitely in the top five. The reason itโs only a 4.2 is because this story does not update regularly, which is a criteria in the review. Author please donโt stop this story ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
Meh, this isn't bad. However, both Naruto and Sasuke have been working hard for the past four years had less/equal amount of development as lee had in 1 year and several months. Naruto almost passed out from Zabuza's killing intent but was okay with Kuramas, who last time I checked is the strongest of the nine tail beasts. The training in the academy was fine, but the results were underwhelming. They should at least be able to defeat Kakashi without the Sharingan individually. Yes, Kakashi is a veteran, but he is a stagnated veteran. He barely improved from the 14 years old version of himself and highly depends on his Sharingan. Kakashi can't use the Chidori without it. Overall, the power scaling is BS. Here is how it should have been. Graduation: Naruto = Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Low Jonin Sasuke (Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Elite Jounin Sakura = Low Genin Kakashi = Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Post Wave Arc : Naruto = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Without Sharingan) = Jonin Sasuke (With Sharingan) = Elite Jonin Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = Low S-class Sakura = Low Chunin Time Skip 3-years: Naruto = S-class Naruto ( Chakra Mode) = Low SS-class Naruto (Kurama Mode) = High SS-class Sasuke = Low S-class Sasuke (Sharingan) = S-class Sasuke (Lightning Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Mangekyo Sharingan) = High S-class Sasuke (Lightning Mangekyo Sharingan) = Low SS-class Sasuke (Perfect Susanoo) = SS class Sakura = Elite Jonin Kakashi = Elite Jonin Kakashi (With Sharingan) = Low S-class