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Muzan Kibutsuji in DxD

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DaoistuEtpEO
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It's an excellent story. You should just add more descriptions and dialogue. Then it will be a better story. You should also make the character different from ost dxd fanfics by making him not interested in participating in the canon, where most characters go to highschool as a student or live in kuoh when there are plenty more opportunities across the world. Don't make him interested in romances and harems. While also making him preserve japanese culture.

DaoisttG3KuY
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joker_P5
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I haven't read the story yet, but you do know that Muzan can't even be compared to some of the mid-tier characters in DxD right? A mid to high-tier character is enough to finish the whole kimetsu no yaiba verse. If you're confused on why I'm saying this, read the novels then you'll understand

colbster303
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it's an Allright story if you made the characters more out there with personality then it would be good. you shouldn't just jump from one thing to another stuff needs to build up try having the mc actually have a personality don't explain all the happend tell him show give details

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LouZhen
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oVOIDLESSo
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The way this came out was a masterpiece itself but not everything is worthy of praise like the fast paced time skip its your story take a deep breath and slow down move at your own pace we will wait author

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Kobyfate
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chakibo
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good good very good

UNfriendlywhatifer
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Eduardo_Lima_4527
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Eu adorei, mas vocΓͺ abandonou a histΓ³ria? ................................................................................................................

Eduardo_Lima_4527
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