Review Detail of DaoistuEtpEO in Muzan Kibutsuji in DxD

It's an excellent story. You should just add more descriptions and dialogue. Then it will be a better story. You should also make the character different from ost dxd fanfics by making him not interested in participating in the canon, where most characters go to highschool as a student or live in kuoh when there are plenty more opportunities across the world. Don't make him interested in romances and harems. While also making him preserve japanese culture.