btw I wouldn't necessarily put it as an "evil chat" as they're mostly gonna be a group of chaotic people having dumb fun. the only person from this chat who I consider pure evil and has no redeeming qualities is the Admin since solely goal oriented whereas the others don't mind having fun and amusing themselves in different worlds. Gil is a collector who wants to know about the heroes and the villains of the other worlds Esdeath wants to fight strong people and find true love Cid wants to spread his name as the Eminence in Shadow throughout the Omniverse Similar to Esdeath, Malevolent Chef wants strong people to fight against though instead, he'll also indulge himself in his vices. And the Admin wants to kill someone REALLY badly I'm intending to make them more depth-full characters and not just one-off villains like the Hero faction or Zouken. In a way, you could say I'm trying to make up for the lack of characterization when I first introduced Ben's chat group - which I'd work on them after I'm nearly done with the Fate arc.

not those types of Mecha. I meant the ones that function like an exo suit for example Infinite Stratos where not only he'd gain air maneuverability, but overall be able to throw hands better. His suit will also increase his own Elemental output to bring forth near absolute zero temperature as well as shooting plasma due to the built-in heat concentrator.

I get your point, really at first even I wanted to write it without the "badguy chat group" but the more I thought about, the less I could come up with something interesting obstacles for the group to overcome. For example, as the group is right now, the trio (Ben, Asta, and Issei True Queen) can sweep the OG FSN cast - especially Asta since he can one tap Servants if he gets a vital hit on them. I know it may seem like a bad idea, but gimme a chance to execute it fully before judging it, okay bro? :) And thx for the compliment as well as the criticism!

and the guy's Sadao from Devil is a Part-timer He's somewhat of a chuunibyou

I just deleted the useless rant about Chat Group fics at the end (only keeping the series and their timelines) I haven't gotten to actually edit them for now - sorry for the false alarm. First, gotta finish this arc before doing a major overhaul to it while I'm working on the Fate arc.

you have fine tastes :)

I'm planning on giving Shoto a Mecha to reach the others in terms of powers when they go to a Mecha series. She and Kirito (he's an engineer in training) will help to create a custom made one based on the mechas of that world.

I chose her mostly about her and Ben to discuss the philosophy of killing. though I agree there could be better options from Night Raid

that vampire anime which focuses on angels and stuff in the manga it also had dinosaurs appear the author's pretty wild XD

like I remember the other chat group fics I read had many characters but with no substance and got treated as side characters.

agreed, that's why I'm thinking of capping the members at 15 for both group chats. Cuz anymore and the story will get too bloated for me to manage.

glad you think as such, and even I agree; it got better with each chapter. it's just that there were some people clowning on the book and gave it low ratings without even bothering to get past the fifth chapter (in this and other platforms), so I wanna make people have a blast with it right from the start. Though now progressing the story and finishing the prologue arc is my first priority before doing anything else.

I explained my take on the Devil species in chapter 13: Alien Management. if you still have any questions regarding it, you can ask me there to avoid spoilers in this chapter.

btw just a question: when reading were there any problems with the story? like do the first chapters need some revising?

and again, sorry for the confusion. Hope you're enjoying the fic

well, to make things clear I said in Chapter 11 that having Ben, Asta, and Issei (at the end of season 4) can clear a lot of worlds. coupled with the chat group, they'd get a lot stronger so there'd be no tension if we're being honest here. That's why I decided to add another chat group who'd act in opposition to Ben's. So there will be four side stories to show to show how they joined in whereas the Admin would be revealed at the end of the Kyoto arc in the main story. Hope this thing cleared things up for you.

If you read Sis-con with Dimensional Chat Group and Annihilation Maker DxD you'd know what I'm talking about. For a time it became a common trope within that era of fanfics but people started dropping theirs due to the lack of commitment and overall difficulty to write such a thing.

Did you pay attention to the time when it was written? 💀 and yeah it's understandable cuz I was a dumb highschool kid at that time

It's based on those Chat Group fics which were once very popular around three or four years ago. I wrote the first chapter at that time. Couldn't continue writing for IRL reasons until I managed to do so recently.

will do