Princess_debbs26
As of CH 23: Other than a few typos, the story is very captivating. The characters do feel a little cliche at times but that is often unavoidable and does not take any from the beauty of the story. I like the pacing and certain lines in the story. (Check your vocabulary through!) It has great potential and I'm sure that as you get more comfortable writing, words will flow better. :)
First of all, the author has a unique writing style that has good compatibility with the theme of the book. The plot is good and the characters are as of now, well-written and developed and there is enough content to read for a while. The only issues were very small and I have pointed out some of them in paragraph comments. Keep up the good work, author. Your book is in my library.