SlyHand
Not a Potato!
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Author's shameless review here! This will be a very slow story that focuses more on the interaction between characters compared to the progression of the actual plot. This will actually makes my brain heat up due to thinking of all the possible conversation and responses so please cut me some slack on the update rate. A bit of a spoiler... The main character will have a system that can summon different characters from other anime/movie/game in a gacha format. That's all from me. Enjoy the story and I hope you like it!
haha is this a reference to the novel and the song? :D
Vegeta = vegetables. Momo = peach. Nice naming sense right?
Wow. That actually makes perfect sense haha
In terms of story, I don't see any problem. Typical system world with some cliche. Quick story progress. Though a bit lacking in scene details. A light read, just the way I like it. The only problem for me is the writing quality. The grammar is really bad, so bad that I am considering to drop this book. However, the author seems to realize this and went did some re editing for a couple few chapters, giving me hope to try and read through some unedited chapter. What I do want to know is whether I can expect better writing quality for future chapters and at what chapter can I expect the change? P. S. I'm around chapter 60