Review Detail of NightClouds in Missing Silver

As of CH 23: Other than a few typos, the story is very captivating. The characters do feel a little cliche at times but that is often unavoidable and does not take any from the beauty of the story. I like the pacing and certain lines in the story. (Check your vocabulary through!) It has great potential and I'm sure that as you get more comfortable writing, words will flow better. :)