MHA: WHEN FICTION BECOME REALITY

loved it, but the mc doesnt use his abillity properly, use arc of embodiment to create, super soldier serum, fountain of youth that ban drank, instead of equip ban character, create kryptonian serum with luthor knowledge, saiyan serum with dr gero knowledge, evolution serum from appocalypse novel, dan pill from xianxia novel, sentry serum,gamer system, and any other system damn it, if i have mc abillity i'm op in the next day!!x

Idk the grammer is horrible, the first chapter was very forced.

TL;DR: meh almost everything's 3 stars, as for the reason: the grammar is meh, the updates are somewhat slow so meh, the story development is......meh, The mc isn't smart at all, can't even think of any smart way to use his power to bypass the stamina restriction like imitating reality warping to make him tireless or any other thing that would make him basically immortal PERMANANTLY, the world is.....normal I mean, I don't like the mc, he can't think smartly, I don't like when an author gives a super op power to their mc but has to find some reasons to nerf the mc af (like making him dumb, like him not wanting to get OFA because the satisfaction he would get when he will see Izuku's despair for a single minute is somehow greater than getting one of the most op quirks in the world)

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Grammar is not the best its readable however, the next issue is intelligence of mc which borders below an IQ of less than 70 he has ultimate power and uses it in the most inefficient way that its infuriating. Idea was not bad but execution was. Still read it you like mha

It has a decent start if you look past the horrible, horrible grammar. Everything went downhill after the protagonist got his "cheat". Although to be honest maybe it's started going downhill ever since we get to know his reason of not getting One for All. He doesn't want to get One for All because he wants to show Izuku that he's still a usless nerd even after receiving the most powerful quirk? That has got to be the most petty reason that you can imagine. Anyway back on track. Approximately 2 months before the sludge villain incident our protagonist finally gets what he wished for his whole childhood/training arc. He gets his ultimate "cheat" from ROB for the most bizarrely false reason, for his "heart". Moving on, the ultimate "cheat" as it turns out was supposed to be nerfed. It really wasn't if you at least semi-smart and know about more fiction than just mainstream anime and comics. To no one's suprise the nerf actually works on our protagonist. Well here it is a point that made me realize that it's another "young master" in disguise. Ever since getting his power protagonists view of everyone but himself plummeted to the depth of a seafloor. At first he still wants to be a hero, a hero like Superman no less, while still planning to enjoy Izuku's despair (at least he thinks that beating him would somehow make him despair which usually never works on shonen protagonist). Then he wants to be an Anti-hero but still claims that he will be No. 1 hero while killing every villain that he wants (**** heroes according to him and civilians would praise him for killing villains in his opinion). And the moment that I decided that yes he's another "young master" and I should really quit reading this. One months before U.A. entrance exam Bakugo blows up his penal or whatever and the protagonist proceeds to beat him up so much that Bakugo has broken arms and nose, but since he has some superficial injuries and there was a history of being harmed by Bakugo he gets scot free with last warning (if he does something else he would be expelled). Right after that macabre episode he goes and announces his new goal and I quote: "My purpose in this world is a face slapping all those heroes and villains especially the lucky protagonist who gains the attention if Number 1 Hero. In this world, I shall not know the meaning of losing as I will gain victory in every battle I encounter." You can just feel" young master" arrogance oozing out of every word of this declaration. Not to mention the constant shitting on Izuku because he couldn't instantly master One for All. That diss is especially unfounded when you consider the fact that protagonist done almost nothing to meaningfully improve his usage of power for the year that he had it. TL;DR Interesting power, stupid and egomaniacal protagonist, abysmal grammar.

MC is so insufferable and such a hypocrite nothing makes sense author always forgets stuff etc. I don't understand a lot in this story and author imposes limits but then forgets about the limits

The grammar is so horrible that I feel like laughing at it. Now I understand why you put the comedy tag. The op is so lame and quirks manifest by Age 4 .

it's a good book dont get me wrong but it reminds me of another fanfic especially when it mistakes his name and says Brando. who is a mc in another fanfic for a mha story especially the chapter where the villain invade mha. in the chapter it talked about mc seeing deku doing a horse stance and copying it while thinking of ways to make it harder.

I love how this story started and how the mc changed in the my hero academia universe,this is also the first story that I learned what a R.O.B is and how this story is going so far,so please keep it up I love this story please.

the story is bad. disrespectful to yogiri takatou by including him in the cover pic

1. Grammar is awful, and has many mistakes. Author clearly just wrote and then published each chapter without even reading it first. 2. For an ***** who live almost 40 years and experience the light and dark of the world, MC act like a teenage shonen character. Plus he has no creativity.

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Bruh the main character says that he wants to be like “superman” and save people. its nice and all but in a few more chapters hes like “i want to be anti-hero” just choose one.

Honestly I love this story. The way you made his character is really different than all of the other BNHA fanfics that it's actually great. The story moves too slow as it took nearly 8 chapters to leave childhood, and the chapters are really long too which is a bonus. His Character ehen he becomes OP had such a drastic change that it feels weird at the start but you get used to it within a single chapter. Also from the looks of things there might be a romance with two girls from class B (forgot their names). Overall this story is great and I will definitely continuously read this. It's easily the best BNHA fanfic I have read.

Why not get AFO using fiction power and get quirks from villans roaming around or use mirio's permiation together and go and get nines or overhauls or dabis quirk away from them

The grammar is really not the best and for my taste the MC is way too cringy. ..............................................................

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work ...

can his hero name be The vairable hero: Mixer pwetty pwes? .

he trains for all his life and he can barely do any push ups and the training is practically useless after getting the most op power. just another wish fulfilment fic.