It has a decent start if you look past the horrible, horrible grammar. Everything went downhill after the protagonist got his "cheat". Although to be honest maybe it's started going downhill ever since we get to know his reason of not getting One for All. He doesn't want to get One for All because he wants to show Izuku that he's still a usless nerd even after receiving the most powerful quirk? That has got to be the most petty reason that you can imagine. Anyway back on track. Approximately 2 months before the sludge villain incident our protagonist finally gets what he wished for his whole childhood/training arc. He gets his ultimate "cheat" from ROB for the most bizarrely false reason, for his "heart". Moving on, the ultimate "cheat" as it turns out was supposed to be nerfed. It really wasn't if you at least semi-smart and know about more fiction than just mainstream anime and comics. To no one's suprise the nerf actually works on our protagonist. Well here it is a point that made me realize that it's another "young master" in disguise. Ever since getting his power protagonists view of everyone but himself plummeted to the depth of a seafloor. At first he still wants to be a hero, a hero like Superman no less, while still planning to enjoy Izuku's despair (at least he thinks that beating him would somehow make him despair which usually never works on shonen protagonist). Then he wants to be an Anti-hero but still claims that he will be No. 1 hero while killing every villain that he wants (**** heroes according to him and civilians would praise him for killing villains in his opinion). And the moment that I decided that yes he's another "young master" and I should really quit reading this. One months before U.A. entrance exam Bakugo blows up his penal or whatever and the protagonist proceeds to beat him up so much that Bakugo has broken arms and nose, but since he has some superficial injuries and there was a history of being harmed by Bakugo he gets scot free with last warning (if he does something else he would be expelled). Right after that macabre episode he goes and announces his new goal and I quote: "My purpose in this world is a face slapping all those heroes and villains especially the lucky protagonist who gains the attention if Number 1 Hero. In this world, I shall not know the meaning of losing as I will gain victory in every battle I encounter." You can just feel" young master" arrogance oozing out of every word of this declaration. Not to mention the constant shitting on Izuku because he couldn't instantly master One for All. That diss is especially unfounded when you consider the fact that protagonist done almost nothing to meaningfully improve his usage of power for the year that he had it. TL;DR Interesting power, stupid and egomaniacal protagonist, abysmal grammar.
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