SuperHippo
This is without a doubt one of the best stories here. The writing is excellent, with rarely any grammatical errors. The story is well paced. Fast during matches, to capture the action. Slow during training and everyday life. Because the slower everyday sections there is time to sprinkle in a lot of characters that each have their own personality and don't feel like robots or cannon fodder. It also helps to prepare the bigger stage that will no doubt come. The only downside I have with this story is the very slow and inconsistent updates. If we are lucky, we get 1 chapter per week. If not we get 3 weeks of chapters that only say "This is not an update.". I really hope the author can get his stuff together, because I really want to read more of this. 4.5*/5* highly recommended.
Really good story you have here. I mean the qualityy was so good I thought the writer was professional and kept searching in Google for untranslated chapters. Finally realized this is an excellent piece of original work. Kudos to you, not only the story is original in proper sense but also great job coming with the game format, and combining with the magic system. Also nice to see our mc struggle to become better, makes it more interesting than all those dumb lucky OP MC's out there. Do hope you will do some nice work on romance side too, even with that being only a side element in the story. The characters are teenagers after all, at least with body. And with the modern setting probably in some urban romance fashion like it was done in "martial arts master". Medea does some like a good female lead candidate though. And while at this topic, please don't go harem route, though I really doubt you would, but just in case. Good romance in my opinion enhances the action stuff by providing both contrast and relief to the action scenes. Most authors unfortunately on this do a bad job of it though, so keeping fingers crossed, at least I feel I can see some potential here. Anyway loved your story, professional level stuff. Would be eagerly waiting for more chapters.
Really great story definitely in the top 3 sports webnovels very original and its amazing how the authour developed an entirely new sport that is unique and fun. Writing quality is good for a webnovel though there is still room to improve. Wish there was more updates. I'm very excited to see where the story goes.
If you are looking for a good sports novel and read this comment, then congratulations! You just stumbled on a treasure chest. Good Character Building, Good Story building, Good Plot, Good Progression, and Good Translation and grammar. That 5 Goods there will keep you wanting for more if you looking for sports type story. The concept of the sport is well thought out and it's rules and detail in its mechanics is rich. I will give it 5 stars if it continues on. Which is my way of encouraging the author to keep going. I will be unhappy if it ended mid stride.
This is definitely within my top 2 original novels that I love to read on webnovel. The story is very entertaining and the writing is great! So many original stories on webnovel will have entertaining plots, but the quality of the writing is so poor that I end up dropping it. Thankfully, this novel has both. I am especially impressed that this is a sports novel about a fictional sport. The author did a great job introducing this sport to the readers and Iโm a big fan of it already! I also like that the author has stayed away from cliches (so far) such as the beautiful cold prodigious FL immediately falling for MC after he beats her along with all other women appearing to fall all over the MC. Thankfully, there doesnโt appear to be any of that in the story. If romance is introduced later in the story, hopefully it would be a slower, more realistic progression. Overall, I highly recommend this story and hope that the author continues it. This novel is definitely going to continue climbing up the rankings!
I design to write a small review after finish the first book. This is a real sport story about a fictional sport called 'battle arena' It could be compare to manga called 'Major' which is about baseball but we follow the MC from his last year of high-school instead of elementary school with the MC has some knowledge and tricks from his first timeline which make it a bit more interesting. The development of story is smooth. I like the MC because he has a very balance personality. The only downside is this so call sport's rule feel a bit weird to me but that is not much of a problem anyway since it is a fictional sport and I focus more on story Lastly, I would like to shamelessly declare this story as the best sport story on this site. (at least IMO)
Reincarnation/time travel is an over used genre with relatively poor quality in actual novels. Yet avid fans of the series(we I count myself as) are drawn Tina and time again to such stories because of the potential that they have. Usually I am disappointed by the poor story telling(I donโt judge translations harshly) that most authors have. Most digress into meaningless tropes like harems or lackluster or easy romances which degrade the overall story. This having been said this story is refreshing with great characters and story depth. This novel is definitely worth the read.
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