Really good story you have here. I mean the qualityy was so good I thought the writer was professional and kept searching in Google for untranslated chapters. Finally realized this is an excellent piece of original work. Kudos to you, not only the story is original in proper sense but also great job coming with the game format, and combining with the magic system. Also nice to see our mc struggle to become better, makes it more interesting than all those dumb lucky OP MC's out there. Do hope you will do some nice work on romance side too, even with that being only a side element in the story. The characters are teenagers after all, at least with body. And with the modern setting probably in some urban romance fashion like it was done in "martial arts master". Medea does some like a good female lead candidate though. And while at this topic, please don't go harem route, though I really doubt you would, but just in case. Good romance in my opinion enhances the action stuff by providing both contrast and relief to the action scenes. Most authors unfortunately on this do a bad job of it though, so keeping fingers crossed, at least I feel I can see some potential here. Anyway loved your story, professional level stuff. Would be eagerly waiting for more chapters.
SuperHippo
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LIKEYeah I actually found this book while searching for something similar to martial arts master. Something with sports coloured with a bit of fantasy touch. But I haven't read Lord of mysteries though. Didn't know it was that good, what a blunder apparently. Thanks for the recommendation. đ
SuperHippo:I love Martial Arts Master! Actually, I'm a fan of the author "Cuttlefish that Loves Diving"!! Lord of the Mysteries is my all-time favorite novel!!