Reviews of Magus of the Wizarding World
Magus of the Wizarding World
Arrowinmyknee
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The MC is exactly the type I'd want in this type of story; he's canny enough to use his advantage to the fullest, but isn't an edge lord about or like leylin. I'm looking forward to when he's old enough for romance, because while there is nice platonic friendships, and him being a cool senpai.. I have a good feeling about the future.
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MC is stupid. He doesn´t want a butterfly effect to appear but still has to speak to harry, hermine and so on. Why? How hard is it to stay away from them? He has a AI in his soul and should first store all knowledge of magic from room of requirment and create a spell to scan a book in a certain area then raid the books of science, phychology, art, economy or every single field you can get your hands on. Afterall main ability of AI supercomputer is not to tink out of the box solution but create a solution from its already present database. Just think about for a second if ai database was filed with all acknowledge he can find in mundane world, then he can ask his ai to create a programme to evaluate his decision making skills and all the decisions he had made or was going to make.
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I personally recommend stopping reading after chapter number 81. After all, the author is rigged to nerf the MC's EQ and IQ, not only is there no real progress towards romance; there is also no progress at all. The writing becomes worse and the excuses to nefeate the MC are more stupid, it also does not allow the MC to use his 2 skilled neurons and allows him to finally investigate the Muggel world a bit to see what is in the MCU
Full of plotholes. Power-hungry MC who needlessly and thoughtlessly jumps into danger for a bit of power-up. Terrible world-building - MC isn't aware he is in Marvel world despite knowledge of Cap America and Mutants being available in the 90s. The plot seems forced as the story follows HP canon stations despite many butterflies, including Ravencalw-Hermione.
Really decent read. My only regret is that I read to fkin fast lol. I will definitely try to find more novels set in this universe as I find it quite cool. Another gripe would be that I feel the merging of the harry potter world and marvel was unnecessary as anything marvel was mentioned maybe 4-5 tines max and only served to drag down the story around chapter 140.
A complete retelling of canon with a side story sprinkled in. The MC for some reason is obsessed with maintaining the "right" plotline, meaning he will never actively try to change anything. Even when something does change he seeks to realign it back to canon. What's the point of writing this? Just post a link to where people can buy the series and you'll have your story.
