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MC, top of his class, given a garbage starter but girls think he's cool. somehow this garbage pokemon beats other pokemon because plot armor. He refuses help in his journey from rich parents. he usually just contradicts himself and whst he says throughout the story. Nothing special about this story. oh and Oak snaked him on good starters but he still fed oak ground breaking research for the free.
Stopt at Chapter 14 because you had to go with the original plot .... why not trying something creativ .... like him not becoming an nija at all and make the hokage beg vor him to rethink
Good enough writing but what made me drop this is that the kyuubi is a female and she can read his memories so she know about his past life and about their world plus the fact that the mc can not hold his tongue stupidly shouting stuff that might have had him killed I hate this kind of plot and MC so this is why the low rating.
MC is always manipulated and is a extremely idiotic person with a extremely bad personality. Translation for free chapters are excellent. After the free chapter, it went downhill. It is still readable but not as consistent as the free chapters. For example, his first summon is called "yellow" then became "ah Huang" or it was called"yellow scarf soldier to "yellow bandana". it will rattle your reading immersion a little bit.
his story has a great plot that starts pretty good. The main character is interesting and fun to read about. The plot is intriguing with good background info and lots of details. That however is also the issue. There is so much detail that a single conversation with an irrelevant character irrelevant to the actual plot will take several chapters. Most recently the MC had a conversation about a deal that lasted around 10 chapters that easily could have been summed up in a few paragraphs. while this story had started out great, it unfortunately evolved into a money hungry author that will do anything to stretch what little content he has as far as he can, delaying the story progression for weeks if not months at a time.
So the MC is executed while the people that he wanted to save cheered at it and the first thing he is concerned is that he cant help some random guy. I have the same opinion as the demon ...The MC is trash, he is the stubid "I will save everyone even if they spit in my face or betray me because im the braindead hero"