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Monsieur_Dreamer
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I've read until chapter 27 so far and I can tell that this story has a huge potential wasted by the MC (so far).. There are 3 huge problems in the story: 1.) The MC is very unlikeable and likes to make choice that risks his life, a guy who died once doesn't seem to be very careful with his life.. 2.) The force relationship between Cho and the MC, while they haven't thought of each other romantically yet the MC is already treats Cho like he owes her somehting. Mind you, this MC is a loner since only has 3 friends before meeting Cho. I hope the girls in the harem won't give the vibe similar to Cho and the MC because it feels so forced.. 3.) The marvel part of the story appearantly didn't affect the muggle world as much as I thought because the MC didn't even know that he is also in the marvel universe.. That's mainly the negatives so far, the rest of the story is either decent or good..

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