The concept is really godamn good, and the story could actually pull off such a thing in the earlier chapters. However, during the tournament that I forget why the mc joins in, there's a beauty... a beauty who was 'So exceptionally cold' and then just decides to not be cold anymore when she sees the mc and how powerful he is. Of course, at the moment, the story is still not THAT bad, but I think I know where the story is going.
Trash.... Plot holes everywhere.... For example when the mc fired the op fireball it was basically like a small sun and yet he survived.... just depleted of mama and I'm sure at his stage he shouldn't be able to cast that in the first place having unlimited skill points is one thing having unlimited mana is another mastery increased not level so I can't get why the spell evolved into something so op instead of intermediate mastery..ECT second the mc is braindead where is the character interface? I want to see his int stat because I'm sure it's 1 and it's says his skill points reached the maximum not unlimited I'm sure the system has a level of sp until a certain level Chinese and medieval doesn't mix I see you tried but you didn't put much thought into as I can see I could feel my brain cells going crazy screaming to run away just at the first chapter I know I'm just a buzz kill but it is what it is this is trash 🗑️.
This story improved my understanding of the phrase “mind-numbing”. 120% cliche. I thought one-sentence paragraphs were bad, but apparently that’s not “exciting” enough, so here we see half-sentence paragraphs. I’m sorry — I could not make it past chapter 2. It felt like I was reading Invisible Dragon except with less soul.
I don't know if its just me but I don't like how magic learning is systematic learning. Everyone learns the same spells and you have to "cultivate" to learn spells. I would like it much more if there were some creativity involved with the spells. I've seen this exact fireball spell almost 10 times in 10 different novels by now.
The story had an interesting concept but the writing is so dumb that it ruins it for me. MC randomly joins a fighting ring to gain money before explaining what he needs money for. Then he spends days fighting there instead of covering his basics and learning the skilled needed to protect himself. A shield spell or perhaps evasion or something. Maybe find some good passive skills. Instead the MC wastes his time and ours with banal nonsense.
This story is about a transmigrator whose system only activates after three years. In those three years, he’s become infamous as a half-baked mage who can’t manage to do anything more than light up a cigarette. Fortunately for him, his system has a bug when it activates and in trying to fix itself, it gives the MC infinite skill points. And well, I’m sure most Webnovel readers know this song and dance already. He’s able to easily become OP and overturn everyone’s opinion on him. It’s basically the same old story. But the translation is decent enough, so if this kind of OP story is the kind you enjoy, it’s a solid choice for a light read as long as you don’t expect anything groundbreaking.