This story improved my understanding of the phrase “mind-numbing”. 120% cliche. I thought one-sentence paragraphs were bad, but apparently that’s not “exciting” enough, so here we see half-sentence paragraphs. I’m sorry — I could not make it past chapter 2. It felt like I was reading Invisible Dragon except with less soul.
Half-Fated Sir
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