He really gave a nonsense reason for the mask. You want to protect your identity? You don’t say. That’s why the thieves are wearing the masks too.

Not sure if partial organs are possible . Plus I’d want the benefits of a second brain not just the survival . Probably better to stuff it in the belly then the chest and mess with cardiopulmonary function .

Missing chapter ?

I mean the heart doing all this is nonsense to start with so who knows what the brain would do.

This strategy doesn't make sense with the dragon. There's no indication that it would die soon like the others. It was in a bad shape because of the injury. The injury that already healed.

If the dude joined a new guild on day one then it's not much of a betrayal to the rest of the guild. Sure they can't play together this game but it's not like he personally screwed each one here.

Reviewed at chapter 80.

This story is basically the Chinese version of the standard Japanese strong from start harem adventure. MC gets put in the initial situation. For whatever reason the XP and gold the MC gets from being killed increases the higher his level is. Eventually the MC gets out. 99% of this is skipped over. We're never shown the MC's status so up until what I've read I don't know if the MC is actually at the max level. We haven't seen the MC kill the devil so we don't know if he became a god or not or what actual benefits the MC gained from doing it. We are never told what the vast majority of talents and skills the MC gets are. Basically MC is uber strong and can do whatever I want him to. The MC has no actual goals after leaving the sacrifice area. He was supposed to get revenge but just killed the guy once and went about his business. He never bothered with the guy who tricked him. ALL of the characters are braindead. MC easily kills guy who is nearly level 50 who merges with a high tier boss' corspse. He can easily kill all the players near level 50 to the point that he chases two top tier guilds away along with all the spectating players. After that he takes two girls to level up on a level 80 boss and easily handles it so that they can kill it. After all that the girls think he needs to be rescued from high level 40 players. Also they found out that he's in trouble through the forums but stopped watching after that for some reason and didn't see him handle it himself? Nonsense. In addition the guy who merged with the boss for some reason thinks that he'll be able to handle the MC even though he knows he's strong enough to take out his merged form which was stronger than two guilds. Nobody has a lick of common sense. Story is entertaining but can not be considered good by any metric.

Read up to chapter 50. The story just isn't that well written. This is in both the quality of the writing and the writing choices the author makes. I feel like the author tries to do a lot of things but none of it comes off that well. It's a system story but the system is barely looked at and doesn't even seem to be the same system of the game he played. He doesn't even seem to be using it to track his progress. I feel like the author is doing a lot of character interactions but none of them are that good and the characters are not that entertaining or interestingly written. I didn't read all the way though to determine the stability of updates so I gave full marks. The story develops at a snails pace. Very slice of life like. The characters are childish, inconsistent, and unrealistic. The MC doesn't act like a character that forced the underground to its knees before reincarnating. He's a passive, clueless, idiot that just goes along with whatever someone says without them so much as explaining why, even if it's directly contradicting his stated goals. If it's just the MC then you may be able to pass it off as the soul mixing messing with him but jarring things happen with other characters too. The world background is barely touched on because the author focuses on other things. As of yet the MC has not gone over the system to try to explain how his stats would match up to regular people, strong people, or the MC. It's just there and unfocused on. I feel it's the same with every other element of the story. The magic is barely explained. advancement system other than magic, the MC, the academy, etc. All we're given is a few sentences before the author goes back to writing character interactions.

This is stupid. The fight happened in an area where adventurers go to fight monsters. There would be traces of fights everywhere. How would they know what the fight was against? His defense is entirely unnecessary and is more likely to make him look guilty when his strength comes out. Well, I guess a lot of people will say stupid things when interrogated. However, MC is supposed to be some great criminal so it seems out of character.

Can this MC make any of his own choices? He has been led around by everyone else in this story since he's been reincarnated. He's completely passive and it's getting annoying.

I don't see the point in asking permission if they can just not tell each other who they're blessing.

Her PoV doesn't even make sense in this context. He's having a flashback because he accepted Ren's memories. Giving her past PoV in this way is weird.

Is this flashback 8 chapters!? Wrote 4 chapters of story and then 8 chapters of backstory on the girl that turned him down?

Well, you haven't even developed the story's setting yet but let's jump into a 2 chapter flashback about characters you've yet to make us care about in the slightest. It's almost painful reading through this.

Author, a flashback chapter is too much right now. You have not yet made the readers care enough about the character to warrant a flashback.

The writing so far is meh.

This is the fourth question so far. No one cares about the MC's dumb questions.

So, the MC is indeed retarded. "I read something similar in a fictional novel so I don't need information on reality now that I'm here."

I also don't believe he's only played on game in his whole life. Why something so unbelievable? Wasn't he normal until he was 16 or something?