The concept is really godamn good, and the story could actually pull off such a thing in the earlier chapters. However, during the tournament that I forget why the mc joins in, there's a beauty... a beauty who was 'So exceptionally cold' and then just decides to not be cold anymore when she sees the mc and how powerful he is. Of course, at the moment, the story is still not THAT bad, but I think I know where the story is going.
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LIKEmy main problem is that there is no world building. a maxed out fireball (which he can cast) is some kind of forbidden spell that is compared to a meteorite. then his next spell is a fire snake which is alot weaker but he can only cast it once or twice but hey whatever. currency wise we got gold and silver 20 gold is aparently a income a normal family earns annualy and 10000silver is aparently not even 1g tier system is weird because of a lack of info but t6 assassins just walk around the streat with an t6 assasin badge which somehow makes no sense
the whole joining the tournament was a bad idea to be started ... why bother to go to the underground fighting if you can just recover the mana by meditation... lol ... and ... also after finding out that alcamiest can make money more then fighter why go to the fighting ground... this is way to unloggical ... and also the MC just forget that caution is the key to survive after getting the system lol that's why to much dump the idea of main to keep reading the book so many mistake Author made it. feels like it's was written by a machine then a human🤣
Sommie_Kyrian:I'm really liking your comment senior Take me in as your disciple please o great one.
Yuuki_Rito_7228:So is he going to maker winnene his lover if not then good bye to this book(i won't be reading and more ch untill i get the answer)