Let's make history!(old version)

hi, shameless author review over here(lol! sorry got a little desperate hehe :) ). The story by far is the same as the theme in Webnovel writing contest but I decided to get a little creative with it. The quality and the character development are good in my opinion, though sometimes I miss frequently updating the stories, but not to worry, I won't let my readers down! The story development is not the most fast-paced and yes it might take some time before the MC meets FC and the story progressing but it's not verrry slow, it just has more parts of the story to cover as a whole. It explores a two different worlds and thus the world building is diverse and unique, both in their own ways. That's all I have to say for now, thanks for reading my story if you did and hope this review helped! Happy reading!

Interesting story, makes you want to know how the MC is going to survive on the new planet. I liked Kara's character and of course her monkey, no one can miss that. Though it's a survival fantasy story, I like how author has put in the emotional angle as well. It holds the plot and makes you want to read more.

Okay story seems preety cool and synopsis is great! First chapter gave me chills because you could feel the tension of MC, really good writing quality! Curious how will MC live in this new world Great job👍

The story started nice and smooth, the narration is also greatly detailed as I didn't have any problem understanding it. There's some typos but it didn't actually ruin the story. It's a good piece so on and I think it will be gooder, keep it up author! (＊￣︶￣＊)

O. M. G!!!! This is amazing!n! I feel like I've been taken to another dimension, especially since it's about time travelling😱 You did a great job maintaining my attention, author!💖 Ooh welcome to the world of authors 💯🤗

I'm giving this book five stars because I was impressed. Your writing quality is great and the first chapter was superb. I like people like Deril who are calm no matter the pressure. Thumbs up to the author.

Overall, this was a pretty good piece of work. I did enjoy reading this. There are some grammatical errors but nothing to throw off the story. Keep writing please, I'm definitely following.

Good plot with interesting development. It gets better and better as you progress through chapters. Please revise your own work by double checking it once you finished a chapter, there are some grammar mistakes that I am not fond of. Continue with the amazing work and be a bit more patient as you go through it

I just noticed that i gave a wrong review the last time (it was meant to be for another novel). Eitherway, now to this one's real review, this is so awesome and the fact that's its one of my fav genre tops it up, well executed, good grammar and absolutely genius. *chef kiss* to this novel.

It's a good read and a great concept, and the character's detail Is incredible. I like the pace of the story so far. I highly recommend you read this fantastic book🌟👌

Hahahaha, i am a huge fan of the monkey. The monkey just got the best of me. Loving the story and it has got this punch that makes me want to continue reading. Kudos to the author and looking forward to more.

Great book....Good plot.... I read all chap at once and I must say, i quite enjoyed it... Hoping to see more from the author....... You can also try the book out.

So far the story is pretty straightforward. The writing quality is quite okay. I read the first few chapters and I think I'll read more to see where it goes.

This chapter is written simply. Simple and nice word choice, dialogues are well written. World background is is nice.Waiting for next chapter.