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  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Replied to Blak_cherry

    Haha...I'm very glad you're enjoying it. More of that in the chapters ahead.

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Replied to Sneakycat098

    It means Miss in Italian

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Posted

    The first few chapters were pretty intense but wow...this is a really good novel. I mean I felt the loss and the grief so vividly, and I am actively rooting for Sawyer's happiness. The writing quality is high up. Would highly recommend. Well done.

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Replied to Sneakycat098

    You're welcome. I'll read on.

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Posted

    I was a little confused when I started but I eased into it after the first few chapters. It definitely has a unique storyline, quite different from what I'm used to. But it's simple and straightforward. I also liked the author notes at the end of each chapter, telling us about the beasts and what they do. I did notice a few grammatical errors but aside that, it was pretty great. Well done.

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Replied to daylightmoon123445

    Oh, sure. I'll do that. Thanks.

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Replied to Kittylovely

    Hahaha...definitely. I'll upload everyday without fail.

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Posted

    This story is quite different from what I'm used to but I found it interesting. Read all five chapters. The writing quality is good and pacing is fine as well. Good job Author.

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  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Posted

    It's a good start to a great story. Good work Author. There are a few grammatical errors but those can easily be corrected. I also think some of the paragraphs are too long but this can also be easily rectified.

  • Ginger_toon
    Ginger_toon2 years ago
    Posted

    The writing quality is really good. Author really knows how to put a lot of tension in a scene. The story progression is also quite good. It's very well paced. I like the flashback. Good work Author.

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