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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity3d
    Replied to DaoistbtIIpQ

    Yes, she was going to do it

    Ch 24 ON THE KNIFE'S EDGE : A NEAR-DEATH ESCAPE
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity9d
    Replied to DaoistbtIIpQ

    I know right, it's heartbreaking 😓

    Ch 22 COMFORT IN THE DARKNESS
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity12d
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    Interesting, want to know what happens next, how is she really going to handle the situation. Nice chapter author

    Ch 10 Tension
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity14d
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    Hummm, I'm still very much confused, I didn't expect this at all. What is really going on, I'm as confused as Tilda. Nice chapter.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    Ch 32 Where is Miles?
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity15d
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    what could be going on, thinking.....

    Ch 31 A pit of darkness
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity15d
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    Hmmmm, strange.

    Ch 31 A pit of darkness
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity17d
    Posted

    Overall this book is really interesting, I recommend it to all who loves school story. It's totally worth the read, check it out. Kudos author, the story was engaging till the end, there was no boring moment. All the best author.

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    CAMPUS SECRETS
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity17d
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    I've finally come to the end of this book, it was a very interesting read, I love it very much. Well done author, all the best.

    Ch 41 Finale: Graduation Day
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    CAMPUS SECRETS
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity18d
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    This story has been very very interesting so far, I love it. A lot are really going on out there, this story is really informative. I can't wait to see what will happen to Gloria and her friends and then Anna. Kudos author

    Ch 9 Anna’s Mum
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity18d
    Replied to Blak_cherry

    Yeah

    Ch 30 My hero
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity18d
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    like I love this chapter, it's so emotional, I almost cried, having someone to stand up for you like that is really something. Keep going author, I'm rooting for you. Nice chapter.

    Ch 30 My hero
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  • obiparadise_purity
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    [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    Ch 34 CHAPTER THIRTY FOUR: SLEEPOVER AT MARGARET'S HOUSE
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    MY LIFE WITH THE DEADLY PLAYER
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity20d
    Replied to ZoeTinnah

    Thank you very much, I really appreciate

    Ch 1 SHOCKING EXPOSÉ
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity21d
    Replied to ZoeTinnah

    Awnnn, that's so sad, I'm so sorry. I hope you get better soon. I'll be waiting till then

    Ch 5 The annoying man.
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  • obiparadise_purity
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    It has been a really, really interesting read. Like I didn't expect Chloe to be a mafia and also related to Jayson. I love the story so much, you did very well author, kudos. I just couldn't stop reading [img=recommend]

    Ch 30 Final exams
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity23d
    Replied to obiparadise_purity

    nothing *following

    "I'm not your babe." Ariana shouted at loud and suddenly the whole class turned to look at them.
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity23d
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    "I'm not your babe," Ariana shouted.... that's the correct way, not a full stop this time but a comma. When there is nothing follow a statement you use full stop like you did in the "Relax babe." it's correct. But when there's something attached to the statement like ( he said, she said etc) it Should be a comma not full stop or period. so it should be "I'm not your babe," Ariana said... NOT "I'm not your babe." Ariana said. I hope this could help and you understand. Thank you.

    "I'm not your babe." Ariana shouted at loud and suddenly the whole class turned to look at them.
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity23d
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    Nice chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update]

    Ch 41 I'm not your babe
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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity23d
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    Well, the story so far have been interesting and engaging. I recommend this story to all who love teen novels especially those who likes high School drama. Although, there are some grammatical error and punctuation error which can easily be corrected by editing it. Anyways it's been quite an interesting read and I can't wait for more chapters, kudos author.

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  • obiparadise_purity
    obiparadise_purity23d
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    I saw what you did here, thanks for that. I can't guess who jumped over the fence, I'll just wait on the next chapter. Congratulations author, your book is really engaging. I'll check your other books, all the best author.

    Ch 40 Jayden isn't the type to like girls
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