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"I'm not your babe," Ariana shouted.... that's the correct way, not a full stop this time but a comma. When there is nothing follow a statement you use full stop like you did in the "Relax babe." it's correct. But when there's something attached to the statement like ( he said, she said etc) it Should be a comma not full stop or period. so it should be "I'm not your babe," Ariana said... NOT "I'm not your babe." Ariana said. I hope this could help and you understand. Thank you.
Well, the story so far have been interesting and engaging. I recommend this story to all who love teen novels especially those who likes high School drama. Although, there are some grammatical error and punctuation error which can easily be corrected by editing it. Anyways it's been quite an interesting read and I can't wait for more chapters, kudos author.