Reviews of Legends Die First

Yo! Yo! It is I Last! Bad News! I deleted this book by accident, so now I gotta rewrite it! So I am not gonna update for a very long time, as I have already started on another book! Well, that's it! I shall take my leave now.

Writing Quality 4/5. Stylistically lousy. Stability of Updates 1/5. Because you don't have them. Story Development 3/5 No story there (yet)? Character Design 4/5. It exists via exposition, but the way characters speak in dialogues (character's voice) is all the same. Also, since everything that's said about the characters is through exposition, you don't really feel connected to them... It's like reading about reading about them. World Background 4/5. A point for originality, minus two points for the lack of much sense. What are all these titles? Do they signify power? With the names of main characters I thought it was all about some school for folclore heroes, which would've been much more interesting, I believe. Instead, it's about I dont even know what.

your story is great so far, the world background is very creative and imaginative and the title of your book surely drag people towards it . Nice book n i wish you good luck

This book is new but shows great promise!!! I can't wait to see what adventures and how the plot twists and turns... I will be following this book closely. I hope you give it a chance as well

To begin with, the title dragged me to know more about the novel. The way writer's thoughts and characters are described is what I loved. Agreed that the chapters are short but considering the author as newbie, he has done a great job. Good luck with your work author. Would be waiting for futher chapters to be published😄

The world background is creative and imaginative. The characters are humorous and likable. cliffhanger left me wanting more... so far great job..

Words per chapter seems kinda short but the exquisite writing makes up for it. One thing I'd suggest is more specification and description on the story setting(where they are). Overall, it was a good read and hope to see more from this novel.

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