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Thanks so much for taking the time to read ny book!🤗

Words per chapter seems kinda short but the exquisite writing makes up for it. One thing I'd suggest is more specification and description on the story setting(where they are). Overall, it was a good read and hope to see more from this novel.

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Really liking it so far, needs slight tweaks in the punctuations and grammar department, but it definitely has pretty high potential. Waiting for more and more chapters and hope you have a good day author.

Still new to to all this. This is my first novel so please be kind:). This was supposed to be a manga so it contains quite a bit of dialogue but I'll try to lessen the dialogues as the story progresses to make it more of a novel:). **. I might suck at this cause I don't really read much novels(or books in general).

It's great so far. Really like how you give emphasis to the fact that they are in China. The portrayal of actions were also quite detailed. I also liked the theme of the story in general. Great job author!

Thank you so very much, I wasn't sure the person who recieved the letter would like it. I'm glad you did!

Thhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhank you so much!

Thank you so much🤗

I'll do that if ever my drawing improves:) Would love to make the manga now but I still lack drawing knowledge and I'm still learning. Thank you though😊

Your use of words is captivating. I would like more detail on the background though. Definitely has potential to be a great book. More power to you author and goodluck on your future works. Nice pen name btw.

Very interesring, I liked the novel. I wish you'd write more of these. Waiting for further updates. Goodluck and more power to you. I'm a novice author but even I can tell this is a pretty good read:)

I really liked your book, I'll give your book a full 5 stars if it keeps improving even further. I hope you continue to write many more chapters:) -Random Reader

Thanks so much, hope you keep on reading🤗

Thank you, please continue supporting reader!

There wasn't much explanation of where they were. I think people without knowledge of kpop groups will not understand this. I like the specification of POVs though and the idea behind it. Waiting for improvement in further chapters. Overall, good work so far!

Aside from grammar, this book is actually really good. I've read the prologuoe and first 3 chapters. So far so good. Complements to the author.

My fav was definitely Glenn, I love Ramil too though.😊😊😊

Thank you so much reader!!!