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2018-04-19 JoinedRussia
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  • Garessta
    Garessta1d
    Replied to Garessta

    I don't know why it censored the word, btw. I wanted to write a m a t e u r i s h.

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Garessta
    Garessta1d
    Posted

    The use of capslock for ephasising stuff is quite *******ish, but overall, the writing style is pleasant to the eye. The story itself doesnt shine with originality, at least from what I gathered from summary, since in the chapters there are it doesnt move that far yet. I can just see the growth of yet another revenge plot, and the way of MC's death is just weird, considering that it doesnt seem like its going to be explained anytime soon, even close to it, or even mentioned. But overdone doesnt neveccary meen bad, and the sprinkle of that secret-society mess that goes on is interesting enough to keep it fresh.

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Garessta
    Garessta1d
    Replied to Aysel_Inara

    Ah, but you read it anyway! And even left a review! Thank you!

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    The Vampire King's Bride is a Transmigrator
    Fantasy Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta3d
    Posted

    Writing quality is good, but could've been better. There are some typos and weirdly written things there and there, plus i'd say that the story would've benefitted from more and better descriptions. Plot-wise... it starts of with a bait and switches into infodumps, but fine, fine. It has originality as fantasy stories go, that I admit. But I think that there are too little of secondary characters introduced in a very short amount of time - it makes me confused with all of them.

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    Taming My Vampire Servant
    Fantasy Romance · AinaWang
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  • Garessta
    Garessta3d
    Posted

    A detective story, this is rare. A lot of things go on from the start, and it can become a bit messy, but between boring and messy I pick messy any day. Very exciting.

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    Criminally God
    Fantasy · BrewingFantasies
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  • Garessta
    Garessta3d
    Posted

    I will cut one star for the quality of English, because really. But besides this, it's a solid story, an interesting and exciting mix of cultivation and LitRPG, not something I'd ever seen before.

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    Eternal Faith- Destiny of King
    Sci-fi · Sabin_Subedi_Fei
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  • Garessta
    Garessta3d
    Replied to Verhygo

    ah, no, the dank was entirely yours.

    Victor drank a half of a glass of water before he finally stopped wanting more. He put the glass back before answering. "I am only this powerful thanks to the nanites. I couldn't do any 'mind tricks' then."
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    Eve of the Doomsday
    Sci-fi Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta3d
    Replied to

    so this is what bothers you, and not the "dank" part? XD

    Victor drank a half of a glass of water before he finally stopped wanting more. He put the glass back before answering. "I am only this powerful thanks to the nanites. I couldn't do any 'mind tricks' then."
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    Eve of the Doomsday
    Sci-fi Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta4d
    Posted

    I like this story, even though its imperfect. It shows a lot of promise. The way author puts details into the world around the characters makes it all the more engaging.

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    You Stole My Heart, And I Stole Yours
    Contemporary Romance · Miss_Pokerface
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  • Garessta
    Garessta4d
    Commented

    "Silva had shoulder..." instead of "Silvia had shoulder..."

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    You Stole My Heart, And I Stole Yours
    Contemporary Romance · Miss_Pokerface
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  • Garessta
    Garessta4d
    Replied to Verhygo

    No, it's 'sic' in a meaning of 'set (an animal) on someone'

    He was right, but it was still hard not to blame him. Eve's anger needed focus to be released, but she wasn't going to sic it on Victor. Instead, she just shook her head and tried to return to the clinical calm. "True. Let's just see if you are better now. Try to send me something."
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    Eve of the Doomsday
    Sci-fi Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta5d
    Posted

    Good grammar and spelling isn't something all books around there possess, but this one does, and good for it! There's also solid-looking system and a basic weak-to-strong plot, though on only five chapters its hard to say much about it.

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    Rise of The Greatest Mage
    Fantasy · Belg4r
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  • Garessta
    Garessta6d
    Replied to Gbm132

    Oh damn, thank you for telling me. Fixed it!

    Ch 46 Have you tried to turn it off and on again?
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    Eve of the Doomsday
    Sci-fi Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta9d
    Replied to Verhygo

    More like "you chose this" then...

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    The Vampire King's Bride is a Transmigrator
    Fantasy Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta9d
    Replied to Verhygo

    No.

    'He must be also level 120. My hits barely scratch him! Not only I don't have any weapons or skills, I don't think Lunatio have offensive superpowers either! What do I do, what do I do…' Nova thought frantically. 'There must be at least something I can use!'
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    The Vampire King's Bride is a Transmigrator
    Fantasy Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta9d
    Posted

    A solid shounen (young action) story, I like it! Can't say it's too original, but it's the good old familiar taste of weak-to-strong protagonist and his cast of snowflakes.

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    My Shifter Academia
    Fantasy · Gaburieru
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  • Garessta
    Garessta9d
    Posted

    There's little to say yet, but I love what I read! The premise is fresh and original, and I'd love to read more soon! I can't way to see how the plot is going to develop.

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    Across 9 Skies
    Fantasy · LeftPinky
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  • Garessta
    Garessta10d
    Replied to Bibliophileaddict

    This is a telling name.

    Ch 17 A road to freedom
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    Eve of the Doomsday
    Sci-fi Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta11d
    Replied to Bibliophileaddict

    I didn't actually read a lot of post-apocalypse stories before, but I will believe you if you say that no one else has bikes in their stories... After reading Zombie Sister Strategy and watching everyone driving on gas and shooting ammo that they got god knows where (six years into the apocalypse!), I really believe you.

    Ch 3 The aura of a dominator
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    Eve of the Doomsday
    Sci-fi Romance · Garessta
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  • Garessta
    Garessta11d
    Replied to Bibliophileaddict

    Well, brain is a computing device in a sense, yes, but a more common meaning for 'computer' is a, quote, "an electronic machine that is used for storing, organizing, and finding words, numbers, and pictures, for doing calculations, and for controlling other machines". Emphasis on "machine". Bio-computers are not a part of that particular story, no :)

    Ch 2 Developer's privileges
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    Eve of the Doomsday
    Sci-fi Romance · Garessta
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