Writing Quality 4/5. Stylistically lousy. Stability of Updates 1/5. Because you don't have them. Story Development 3/5 No story there (yet)? Character Design 4/5. It exists via exposition, but the way characters speak in dialogues (character's voice) is all the same. Also, since everything that's said about the characters is through exposition, you don't really feel connected to them... It's like reading about reading about them. World Background 4/5. A point for originality, minus two points for the lack of much sense. What are all these titles? Do they signify power? With the names of main characters I thought it was all about some school for folclore heroes, which would've been much more interesting, I believe. Instead, it's about I dont even know what.
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