Legacy of the Multiverse

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Well can't really give you 5🌟 only spammer do that. Writing Quality: the writing is good no errors easy to read Stability of Updating: well its new its not been 3 days yet and alreay have 7 chapter but i suggest only release 2 chapter per day or 1 chapter per day or 3 chapter per weak so as to relax sometimes and not to have writers sickness Story Development: in naruto arc or chapter 7 is the best scene or MC done so far being naruto not being soldier for other Character Design: meh you didnt even visualize the apperance of MC on SAO World Background :havung fox summon realm is good addition to existing World Background

SAO: Wuxia. Must I say any more? The grammar is google translated, and the author seems to be Chinese. Expect inconsistencies, if you do attempt to read this. Why the hell did it have to be wuxia?

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Only got about 10chapters in before I decided to drop it. Writing: Sucks, as everything seems pretty rushed and nondescript. Doesn't really describe characters or specifics, and thereby comes across as more of a generally summary as to how MC goes from 0 to a Gary Stu. Development: Pretty much rushed, due to timeskips all over the place. MC goes from being 2 to 5, then teenage, and all we really glean in the story is topics he's trained or a company he's founded. Even after jumping into Aincrad, there's no real character or game breakdown. He basically just enters and solos or masters everything with AI assistance, and the only thing described in depth was a few boss fights, if that. All in all, if you can ignore the typos or writing quality, you might enjoy the novel since it's a decent wish-fulfillment OP MC kinda story.

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author, also, in passing through the world of ('shinma mao no testament'), take the sword of the village of the heroes, ejejej. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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I think this story is good, it's just that you need to explain some descriptions of some things [maybe(?)]. Well, thank you for writing it. I hope you don't drop it.

I already left a review earlier having read the SAO arc and now leaving the review getting through part way through Naruto. There is no character development. There is no story development. It is a summary of what the author seems to want to have done in each anime. Rushing through the mc's decisions makes the entire read feel like an attempt at a trailer of a movie series.

It's very entertaining, sometimes you just want things to go perfectly right and that's what you find in this series. I hope you keep it up.

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I have a saying if you are doing a fanfic you already have the world building is up to you what you do with it. Main character- not developed -1 The story feels really rush -1 Character are so flat that it makes me believe that planet earth is flat and not a sphere -1 The beginning was somewhat good 1 There is barely any dialogue -1 Okay we start whit a 5 we calculate everything and our final score is 🥁 a [2]. This is complete wish fulfillment fanfic. Ps: my real score is a [2] not a 2.2 just in case I hate decimales.

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i just started reading this and i think its better than alot of stories in my library, keep up the good work. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

One of my favorites fanfics out there Please continue author-san I'm always waiting for your new chapters ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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