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I am impressed so much with how the author characterize and develop his own world-building. This story has so much to offer and has a lot of promising plots to work on which may become a hit for a story ... I just hope the author will make a daily update to garner more reader-base. I want more please. This is a good story! Great Job Author-nim!
This feels like a Netflix adaption of Warhammer. The world seems really cool but the characters are weird. There's a scene where one of the bolt jack dudes is working on the machines and the author describes in vivid detail how his muscles are flexing. I have no clue who the target audience is for this. One dude is described as having "black onyx skin". The author didn't specify if this character was covered in sooth or motor oil so idk how to feel about that description
There's only one chapter when I read this but this story was interesting so far. I read this with my boyfriend and he said it reminds him of Warhammer but with a twist. I liked the fight scenes and the mechanical noises that were described by the author. I also liked the dynamic between Fhjac and the boltjacks (mechanics). I wasn't a huge fan of the descriptions of the machines, felt like they went on for too long. I don't understand why the boltjacks wear goggles but don't wear shirts when they're working with the machinery.
This book is well made and extremely detailed The only thing I would add to this first chapter is a little more background info as to why they are there But aside from that, It felt as iff i was in the book itself The way the author portrayed the environment was superb!! I can’t wait to read future chapters of this amazing book
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