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There's only one chapter when I read this but this story was interesting so far. I read this with my boyfriend and he said it reminds him of Warhammer but with a twist. I liked the fight scenes and the mechanical noises that were described by the author. I also liked the dynamic between Fhjac and the boltjacks (mechanics). I wasn't a huge fan of the descriptions of the machines, felt like they went on for too long. I don't understand why the boltjacks wear goggles but don't wear shirts when they're working with the machinery.

JUNKSTARS

A_N_Crestmore

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Hello! I listened to some of your critiques and made some changes. I tried describing the ELUs a bit better, and I fixed the issue with the shirts on the Boltjacks.