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Review Detail of Yarn_Boi in JUNKSTARS

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This feels like a Netflix adaption of Warhammer. The world seems really cool but the characters are weird. There's a scene where one of the bolt jack dudes is working on the machines and the author describes in vivid detail how his muscles are flexing. I have no clue who the target audience is for this. One dude is described as having "black onyx skin". The author didn't specify if this character was covered in sooth or motor oil so idk how to feel about that description

JUNKSTARS

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Hello! I read your review and took some of your criticisms. I was merely attempting to describe a person of color and have since changed it to a better description of his skin tone.