Anotoki
A web novel with the touch of a seasoned author. The writing is excellent, and writing issues are few to none. The story has compelled me to read most of the already published chapters and keep it in my library, especially since the story is updating at a fast rate. The characters seem well-written, and the MC is still wrapped up in a sense of mystery. As the story is still in its infancy, the world background is still one of the areas that need more exploration, but I'd say it deserves a 5 star as of now. Good work :)
Review After CH5, may review again after seeing more progress. WQ is quite good. Author took time to naming things in the novel. SD is fast paced which is appropriate to its genre. Always good to start it with action in the early chapters. CD could use some uniqueness through how the powers were made in the universe. Let's see how that's backed up in the next chapters. US not sure with this one. WB follows the meta of urban fantasy, students with powers etc. Let's see how the author will break the norm. Overall, this has great potential. Keep it up!
From the Synopsis, I like the idea of the used-up reincarnation idea. I applaud the author for the idea that they tried in chapter one, but I believe it falls short. I do like the idea of seeing the Polar Bear and being the only one to recognize it for what it is. But I do feel confused as I'm not fully introduced to the MC. Especially when a new character runs up to him. The dialogue is somewhat hard to follow- and I, as a reader, get lost when reading it.
The writing in this book is amaizing, the way chapters transition into each other and the way the characters are developed, be it through the conversations or even the authors description. I like the mystery that is imbued within the book, giving it its own uniqueness. Well done author!!! I looking foward to more chapters!đŻđŻ
Reading this almost feels like watching a anime. I was thoroughly entertained as the scenes went on. I liked the character of Narukami a lot. But there are small errors like 'anyhow' is written as 'anywho' at few places, but these errors can be remove as you start with editing, and as the novel is still ongoing I understand that you might have missed it. But leaving that aside, it's a really enjoyable reading IZUKA. I am looking forward to the upcoming chapters :)