AJONAFXX
TBH,It's a good story. The fL is stupid but when you use the genre teen...you have remember that Teens are bound to do silly mistakes and that's what Lucy is doing...I won't give much spoilers coz it will apoil the fun. I want Lucia to be d@m adult but she as a teenage girl is acting a per age. As for Leo,I have no words for him. He is confusing me...I can't hate him nor I can like him.... But for once I really want them to think with a clam brain....and perhaps all their problems will be solved...but what's the fun of story if the solve the problem in day one?
I love this novel đ it was amazing to read đ not only this but other as well. hey I usually won't read this types of novel so I can't complain or comment any thing but I can say pls read the novels throughly if you miss one of it chapters then boom everything would be messed and you won't get what plot point. lastly Sis Ajona keep working pls đ
I totally fell in love with the cover and the synopsis. The latter was really well written, although it was too short. The first hundred words were definitely enough to capture my attention. I love the way the story explain the scene with good vocabulary. My only complaint is that I can't understand whether the story is in the third person or first person as that hasn't been mentioned. I am desperate to know more about the future of the two. I wonder how they will come back together and if they will ever fall in love again.
One word, Drama. That's all you need to describe this novel. Purely dedicating your time to write heart wrenching stories, is nothing short of a sadistic author wanting to see the readers cry. Although there are grammatical errors, each chapter entails a vivid imagery that bypasses the novel's flaws. Still, there's lots to improve on so do your best in writing.
So far, I like the storyline. Very interesting. The characters are well introduced and I like how the author wrote the interactions between her characters. The flow is good, but I've noticed some minor grammatical errors that can sometimes confuse the current scenarioso. But overall, It's a good story. Definitely worth a readđ!! Nice job author!!
I'm not much of a fan of romance stories but I dig romance that start from childhood. (who doesn't like childhood friends turned into lovers, right? and the kid who pinches cheeks and hug a crying baby girl is such a flirt lol! but I like it, anyway) The writing needs fixing but I see potential in the amount of description in this novel. An author can only improve as time goes by so, gambatte author!~