Review Detail of docaqui in ISLAND OF MEMORIES

this is actually awesome, ngl.. very well written and very well describe for the characters. tho, i do warn anyone who will read this review, i only read the first chapter and i can say that it is already good.. the only problem i have is the wall of text.. i suggest that you should tone it down to 2 to 3 sentences per paragraph so it doesn't look like it is so compacted.