wintermist1994
The story is basically a Japanese novel with an op cringe protagonist. It is honestly fun to read something like this again... I'm honestly tired from all the cold ruthless op MCs that can even hold their character straight... c'mon are you a ruthless or just edgy as fk. The author has said in the summary what type of story its going to be so I dont get why people are bitching about it beeing as it was described. Now onto the story itself. There are 2 problems that I have with the story. First one is the grammar. It is honestly not bad as some of the reviews might make you believe... since I have seen bad grammar. From which you just loose brain cells and there is a ton of those types of novels. This one is very much readable and the mistakes are minor and easily fixable. The mistakes also happen maybe once to three times a chapter... so not that often. Second would be the MC. He is not terrible since I wouldn't have read 20ish chapters if he was... but you have to make him grow somehow. I like the fact that he is cheerful but it's really annoying at how idioticaly he acts sometimes. Get him a skill that will calm him down a little bit so he doesn't embarrass himself. Showing lustful expressions just makes him look like a creep and even though it is sometimes funny... his character will defenitly get stale pretty quickly. Keep it happy go lucky but please make him realise that he should take things a bit more seriously and get himself a bit of a cool head (cool head in the terms that when he is excited he won't act like a kid and start shouting whooo! hoo! or accidentally make his mouth slip and stuff like that) Good Luck with your novel... though i think that the depressed "ruthless MC" loving audience on this website is not made for this novel. Sometimes I really see some of these comments and think if these people ever got some love in their lives? Like wtf...
Well it's got premium and I don't want to continue anyway. You know, even with comedy tag, weird novel name and lame synopsis, it's still not tolerable. Writting qualities 4 star - it's could be understood, but there is not much detail and it's feels bland. Character design 2 star - it's start horrendous, mc totally deserves his title as cringe king. It's does become a little better, but author pull his character out of his аss in very fast manner. And he is still clown even after that. He still fails easily for every beautiful womens as simpleton and generally still cringy. He's little drama about being shut-in loser was flop too. Because previously it's doesn't get any noticeable hint of this. Just a conviniet answer why he is acting like sugar addict kid... And there is no major difference in his attitude after this. He is just fall more in love with beast-girl, but he is kinda already fall for her ...in like same day that he buy her... And she is too... Sigh, right-right, I shouldn't expect something coherent ...but still. Story development 3 star - he does try to change mc, I give him a credit. World background 2 star - practically no details of how this world function or live. Author doesn't care about it. And most of the time twist logic to his whims, making other characters to some really unrealistic shit. (like come on, beast girl loves him so hard after 1 day, it's not even funny. Magical girl from the cave literally dream about getting to know him closer, after mc little simping for her? Bruh...i don't think noble girls would be dumb as this.) it's wishfufilment, for sure... Conclusion. Even after all of this, I would still give better rating to the story. But it's feels like author doesn't even have idea or outline of the plot. Things just happen and mc live. Even in slice of life stories there at least some plot, but there doesn't seem any. And that's why, I don't think there even need to read further. Mc have no goals, no challenge (aside mental one) and no pressure on himself...evwn Makoto from tsuchi ga isekai was thinking about getting home and punching goddess...
To be honest here, the first few chapter hook me up to this novel but after that it takes a u turn and story gets dramatic. First the Mc was shown free and creating his own castle and suddenly he lost his control over power and attack his lover. Good story but execution is too bad and its lost its charm.
No plot, bad grammar and the cringiest main character ever going hohoho and fufu, laughing to himself while having conversations Slavery doesn't seem to be a thing frowned upon by their society, almost as if they consider it a small timeout Training? What is that? I only need to level up my skill and its rarity Watch as cringemeister continues his journey in another world with his top level cringe skill
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