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Review Detail of Cewu in Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping

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Cewu
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The story is basically a Japanese novel with an op cringe protagonist. It is honestly fun to read something like this again... I'm honestly tired from all the cold ruthless op MCs that can even hold their character straight... c'mon are you a ruthless or just edgy as fk. The author has said in the summary what type of story its going to be so I dont get why people are bitching about it beeing as it was described. Now onto the story itself. There are 2 problems that I have with the story. First one is the grammar. It is honestly not bad as some of the reviews might make you believe... since I have seen bad grammar. From which you just loose brain cells and there is a ton of those types of novels. This one is very much readable and the mistakes are minor and easily fixable. The mistakes also happen maybe once to three times a chapter... so not that often. Second would be the MC. He is not terrible since I wouldn't have read 20ish chapters if he was... but you have to make him grow somehow. I like the fact that he is cheerful but it's really annoying at how idioticaly he acts sometimes. Get him a skill that will calm him down a little bit so he doesn't embarrass himself. Showing lustful expressions just makes him look like a creep and even though it is sometimes funny... his character will defenitly get stale pretty quickly. Keep it happy go lucky but please make him realise that he should take things a bit more seriously and get himself a bit of a cool head (cool head in the terms that when he is excited he won't act like a kid and start shouting whooo! hoo! or accidentally make his mouth slip and stuff like that) Good Luck with your novel... though i think that the depressed "ruthless MC" loving audience on this website is not made for this novel. Sometimes I really see some of these comments and think if these people ever got some love in their lives? Like wtf...

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Cewu
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Rly annoying you can edit these posts or comments... there are a few mistakes that are just getting on my nerves... webnovel, I don't want to have to re-read my text before I post it!

wintermist1994
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thanks alot of your review, and i know my grammar is weak so i rely on the reader to point it and fix it along the way i write the novel and yeah, some people did mistaken with my described review, i already described that all that i needed to be describe, and what they will get when they read my novel. i already stated that English isnot my 1st language so if you found mistake just commend it as i will fix it when i finished writing my stock chapter(or edited chapter now, since i edited it once again from the beginning lol XD) but people took it as I lower the writing quality that kinda make confused honestly, i said that with the intention that some people that picky with the grammar don't read my novel -.- anyway, if you read at ch 33+ he got better a lot. and if you wait and read further, there's a reason why his personality messed up like that lol XD along with the heavy responsibility he get, the wiser and grown up the MC be. and I already stated to people that complain that MC is idiot by stating the MC in my story is human (growing and raising as a human) so as human being it should be, he has many flaw XD

wintermist1994
wintermist1994Authorwintermist1994

ah and if you still reading please stop at chapter 36, the 37-46 not edited yet

Cewu:Rly annoying you can edit these posts or comments... there are a few mistakes that are just getting on my nerves... webnovel, I don't want to have to re-read my text before I post it!