Review Detail of Yuri_is_Ntr in Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping
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Well it's got premium and I don't want to continue anyway. You know, even with comedy tag, weird novel name and lame synopsis, it's still not tolerable. Writting qualities 4 star - it's could be understood, but there is not much detail and it's feels bland. Character design 2 star - it's start horrendous, mc totally deserves his title as cringe king. It's does become a little better, but author pull his character out of his аss in very fast manner. And he is still clown even after that. He still fails easily for every beautiful womens as simpleton and generally still cringy. He's little drama about being shut-in loser was flop too. Because previously it's doesn't get any noticeable hint of this. Just a conviniet answer why he is acting like sugar addict kid... And there is no major difference in his attitude after this. He is just fall more in love with beast-girl, but he is kinda already fall for her ...in like same day that he buy her... And she is too... Sigh, right-right, I shouldn't expect something coherent ...but still. Story development 3 star - he does try to change mc, I give him a credit. World background 2 star - practically no details of how this world function or live. Author doesn't care about it. And most of the time twist logic to his whims, making other characters to some really unrealistic shit. (like come on, beast girl loves him so hard after 1 day, it's not even funny. Magical girl from the cave literally dream about getting to know him closer, after mc little simping for her? Bruh...i don't think noble girls would be dumb as this.) it's wishfufilment, for sure... Conclusion. Even after all of this, I would still give better rating to the story. But it's feels like author doesn't even have idea or outline of the plot. Things just happen and mc live. Even in slice of life stories there at least some plot, but there doesn't seem any. And that's why, I don't think there even need to read further. Mc have no goals, no challenge (aside mental one) and no pressure on himself...evwn Makoto from tsuchi ga isekai was thinking about getting home and punching goddess...
Isekai Absolute Copy and Online Shopping
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thanks, most of the problem you stated already being fixed at latest chapter, about why he was chaotic and the world building, I introduce it after chapter 52, It's not that i didn't care about the world building, i just want to slowly build it along the chapter XD. and as you predicted, I write this novel without thinking before, so i didn't draw the big line yet, since i got premium i started to fix it seriously and draw the plot big line until it ended. but as you say, the mc here is still clueless why he get transported there and decided living at his pace, just recently, i started giving a hint to the MC true identity, and this identity that will lead him and give him a goal. as for beast woman, since it's medieval era, I set the mindset of people in that world to focus of how to survive and live better, and how fickle love is at that time. in time when you see death and violence everywhere, i think its easy for people to fall in love as long as they see light... hmm.. but as expected, maybe as you said that I'm wrong with my perception. and I mostly fixed the chapter already, it's just left with chapter 46, the grammar and the story, since its free until chapter 46 please re-read it(If its convenience for you XD) and don't if you are already lazy to do it lol XD thanks for the review I appreciated it a lot!
wintermist1994:thanks, most of the problem you stated already being fixed at latest chapter, about why he was chaotic and the world building, I introduce it after chapter 52, It's not that i didn't care about the world building, i just want to slowly build it along the chapter XD. and as you predicted, I write this novel without thinking before, so i didn't draw the big line yet, since i got premium i started to fix it seriously and draw the plot big line until it ended. but as you say, the mc here is still clueless why he get transported there and decided living at his pace, just recently, i started giving a hint to the MC true identity, and this identity that will lead him and give him a goal. as for beast woman, since it's medieval era, I set the mindset of people in that world to focus of how to survive and live better, and how fickle love is at that time. in time when you see death and violence everywhere, i think its easy for people to fall in love as long as they see light... hmm.. but as expected, maybe as you said that I'm wrong with my perception. and I mostly fixed the chapter already, it's just left with chapter 46, the grammar and the story, since its free until chapter 46 please re-read it(If its convenience for you XD) and don't if you are already lazy to do it lol XD thanks for the review I appreciated it a lot!
I agree with beast girl falling for him in such fashion. But wouldn't she be more distrust of him. She doesn't need to show it, but it's far more appropriate to her be more suspicious of him, right? She is quite intelligent. Situation with noble girl was iffy too. I don't mind raunchy *** scene under drugs But after mc grow up a bit, falling in love after maid drugged him and noble girl have plans on him, seems too immature. Don't he have at least some thoughts beside how nice her pussy is? Either way, I try to read again. If it's really become better, I definitely write another review.
wintermist1994:thanks, most of the problem you stated already being fixed at latest chapter, about why he was chaotic and the world building, I introduce it after chapter 52, It's not that i didn't care about the world building, i just want to slowly build it along the chapter XD. and as you predicted, I write this novel without thinking before, so i didn't draw the big line yet, since i got premium i started to fix it seriously and draw the plot big line until it ended. but as you say, the mc here is still clueless why he get transported there and decided living at his pace, just recently, i started giving a hint to the MC true identity, and this identity that will lead him and give him a goal. as for beast woman, since it's medieval era, I set the mindset of people in that world to focus of how to survive and live better, and how fickle love is at that time. in time when you see death and violence everywhere, i think its easy for people to fall in love as long as they see light... hmm.. but as expected, maybe as you said that I'm wrong with my perception. and I mostly fixed the chapter already, it's just left with chapter 46, the grammar and the story, since its free until chapter 46 please re-read it(If its convenience for you XD) and don't if you are already lazy to do it lol XD thanks for the review I appreciated it a lot!