Charan56
Every thing was good until MC accepted Cang yue's confession, I mean it was so unnecessary to accept that confession that I don't even wan't to read anymore he know that jasmine liked him but he still accepted her confession was really cringe I mean she not worthy of MC no matter who say I am not going to accept that she is just going to be MC's pet that need to feed cultivation resources and have S** with and thats it I think author really made a bad decision to accept her as first harem member so I just want to say author thanks until this time with that move you did there every thing over for me(you know I read so many atgs fanfics so I can see future direction of your story in atg universe so with turn you did here harem of this story made story over for me). Because of language barrier I can't express what I have in my mind so if the things I write here is heavy sorry fo that.
This is a Great novel You should definetly go check it out, first of all the mc avoid all wunxia cliches and simp situations, he is being OP with the time and so Far he can beat tyrants tier level cultivators and he is not Even a throne, when he get to the divine realm he Will probably bitch slap them without worry The story and interacctions are well and the girls he Will add in the harem are just the few useful, that means he Will not leave them while he is in his Journey like the OG jun che Really good without all that wunxia drama so Far, You should really check this out, totally worth it
I don't really usually comment on the stories I read, not for anything in particular, but I can't help but comment on the great amount of joy that reading this work has brought me so far, when it comes to ATG I've always felt bad I use that fanfics give to the character of Yun che because I think that if you know how to use this character you can give a lot of ideas for very interesting and funny stories This kind of plot with this new yun che is simply incredible and I can't help but wait like an addict for the new chapter I would like to congratulate the author for the hidden work of art that he has left on this site and I wish him the best of encouragement to continue this great story My sincere thanks to the author
Well You can read the other reviews and you would get the idea. Simply Said. This is the best ATG Fanfic out there. I have read many of them. But this is truly the best. So what is better than the other ones?? Writing Quality ... The story is written in proper english, No shitty grammatical errors. No He/She errors. Perfect but easy to understand word flow. The flow is so well, I didn't even realise when I covered all the chapters.( and for the haters... It's was not because of words. Each chapter had at least 1500-2000 words for sure but I didn't count) Character Design is actually the best part as the Yun Che of the story is the best ever. Each character acts the way you would expect them to act actually if that event would have happened. System too is good as it is a system of the person and the person is not a slave of the system. There are no penalties. Quests are given but are for the benefit of Yun Che himself and he is not forced to accept them. He can refuse them. The shop part is very funny. But it's a secret for you. Next ... Well there are more points but I gotta go. So I recommend the story to any and everyone . C YA
After reading until the last chapter, I can only say that I like how it goes, I am not a native of English, so I do not know if the grammar and all that pod of failures that there will be, if like how I progress, not so fast with the force, is not pervert looking for girls like collecting pokemon. - First it has its main point, which is to become strong, it is not like the other "fanfic" where they start with a dominated protagonist, who does not know what to do (those who when they have Op powers, they only use it to have all the beauties in their bed just for fucking). - Since it started until now I like how it goes, it has been slow, but not so slow, it does not get into other people's problems, as other authors do. - You presented "can yue" that is different from other "fanfic" where they don't give it a different approach (as for example in other "Atg" stories, they always put "can yue" only as bait for the protagonist to help her because of its beauty, in passing also so that the protagonist feels good about himself), but in your story, I see that his role is not simple, you are giving it a different approach, where alone it is managing to obtain more power, not one that It is given by the protagonist who would make things easy and without any effort. - I just hope to see how you will treat "xiam quiyue" for treating him badly, I want to see how you put her in her place and make her see that she is not a big deal and that what she does is only because of her selfish satisfaction that she has for her mother , where he hurts the rest of his family that he is already losing with each time he gets more involved in the cultivation that blocks his emotions. - I would put more but it i am lazy xD.
I like your motto "Never Give Up". Awesome is the only word I could use to describe the fanfic. The relationships are not forced and the character development is very good. Just don't get yourself stressed out and focus on haters. Haters are everywhere. I hope you show your version of how ATG should be.[img=recommend]
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